Spider-man reincarnation (YT: Green Door/ type "green door blue lock")

As a friend of the author, I have to rate this five stars. The main thing here is the great grammar, but there's also that 'SI' feeling, in its raw state, which makes one really feel connected to the main character. All in all, I recommend this to any spider-man or marvel fan. Bad_Ken has many things planned for this!

Well written story of a teenage MC becoming Spider-man. While the MC does have "Peter's" intellect, his IQ and EQ are not well developed at the beginning of the story, owing to him also being a teenager before transmigrating. The MC tries to use whatever information he can to build up to become the superhero he always wanted to be and exploit the weaknesses of his opponents. Overall, it's a great story from weak getting stronger as time passes. The MC needs this slow build-up to get used to his life in general as well as the turmoils of becoming a superhero. Enjoying the development thus far. A recommended read

*sniff* I am fucking happy man...finally an SI peter parker FF where peter aint no *****,,,thank you author....all I ask is make him ruthless, supervillains need to die, they cause more death....OP MC...add some romance and fluff but no shallow **** and no MJ [I dont like her,,,she a slut, sad life yes but she is ****ty].....also MC is one of the smartest people in marvel,,so make use of that brain....anyway GL

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The plot itself is fine, but its the MC that completely ruins it for me. At first the MC was supposed to be your average Joe, but somehow he can kill people without remorse evil or not. The MC is also really emotional at the most random times, which really contradicts with how the MC acts other times. One time the MC cries for somehow he didnt even know while he himself has killed a lot of people already, so you'd think he would be used to it. Also the MC is one of the most cringiest MC's I have ever seen, he makes the OG spiderman (who is also a bit cringy and cheesy) look like a chad.

This is an okay story but the BIGGEST problem I have with this story is homophobic slurs. I’m only on the second chapter and already MC is calling certain individuals faggots. If the use of slurs weren’t in this story it would probably be a five star story. To all people looking to read this story, don’t it’s not really worth it.

The MC is just too dumb. I feel like this could have been much better if the author didn't purposely make the MC act stupid just for "development". Plus the MC is really violent and brutal which I normally would be fine with but considering they were just a normal 15 year old in their last life it makes no sense.

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I want to continue reading but I really can't, the writing quality is good, so is the update rate, but the mc has some serious personality problems. I think he maybe suffering from mild psychosis or some other mental disease, he is quick to anger(not much of a problem on its own), he wants to be a superhero and hates bullies but his personality leans more towards a bully(or a messed up Punisher), and acts like a xianxia AYM protagonist. I have no qualms about him killing but the way it was written really makes me think he has some sort of mild mental illness.

I love this novel very much and hope he updates new chapter fast and also make the pairing as mc x Gwen x Natasha plz............................................

Can you please release the solution to this mystery of his relationship today? . I loved it and hated it at the same time and I'm feeling sick with the suspense laterally. P.S.: When I said literally, I meant literally literally

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The best Spider-Man fan-fiction on the website so far. Do not drop it! I hope you continue, there are still lots of potential villains he can face against. Good luck!