The Beach in California

This is a nice novel indeed! Having a nice dialogue and narration made it fantastic. This is intriguing and we will find out what will happen if we read on. Good job author and have a good day!

The story is good so far! I like how you vividly narrated the story and the development was nice and steady. I love the plotline and it was an enjoyable read! Keep it going until you reach a million views and you will find it pleasing to the eyes. Characters are showed well with various emotions and I can't help but be attached to them. Kudos and your reader here. Peace ✌️

OMG!!! I love this book! The characters, the sypnosis, the acts...! It leaves me breathless. Great and a Good Job Author![img=update] Keep it up!

The new beginning is so good!!! We get to know what really happened with Sam's father and Spencer is a bit mean hehe. Good job, author!! Have a good day!

This is such a good book! The beginning already drew me in, especially the writing was beautiful. Although the writing got simpler later on, it still fits the story wonderfully and we can really feel what the main character feels. (apart from a few mistakes that can be easily done with some editing) The pace is great, neither too slow nor too fast. Once you start reading it, you can't help but want more. Everyone should give this book a try because you won't be disappointed but only love this more and more!

Hmm.... interesting! Synopsis is great and writing style is good. The story is also very good and I like the way you described the plot. Keep it up!

Honestly, it is very realistic. The characters were very life like. It's like being there with and watching them. But I wish to see some explanation or third person view other than only dialouges. But other than that everything is great. I loved the plot. I can't wait to see more!!!!!!!!

Hi, Blissa! I'm loving the character so much!!!! This is so good!!!! Good job, author! Have a good day![img=recommend] We need more chapters, hehe[img=update]

I am so amazed how intriguing this is, I love the characters especially, Sam and Amber. Can't wait to read what's next[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

I am amazed at how intriguing the storyline is. Some plots could be written longer but overall, you are slowly putting your name out there! Do not give up on this. You have a talent. :)

OMGGGGGG!!!! This book is soo good! The characters looks real, and with the fact that you use actual places is so amazing. Good job, Blissa! We need more chapters!❤️

The beginning was pretty good, I loved the synopsis and the title of this novel so kudos Author! I notice that there is a lot of dialogue but I think as reader also I prefer the point of view is explaining what's around, what's happening etc. But this is pretty good, great job!

Hi love, woah this does seem like a fam-drama of sorts, it full of ups and downs and lot of it is lively and makes me smile the celebrations especially! This is an intriguing book, the synopsis and book cover are below mediocre so pleaseeee change them as readers need something interesting to catch their eye in order to read! if u need help dm me on Instagram! @gaureeey is my ID! with a little work, you'll be good to go, honest review because I wanna see u grow and evolve as a writer so no sugar coating!

Apart from the few grammatical mistakes, I find the overall concept of the book to be good. We all are learning to write and it shouldn't dampen your spirits. Keep it up.