As I look into your eyes,
longing and passion is what I wanted to see.
To be able to know,
that darling you also love me.
And darling so it goes,
merrily dreaming the day that you'd see and want me.
Not just a friend,
but a woman you want to hold and cherish for eternity.
Blinded of what I wanted to see,
I saw you happy with another she.
As my dreams unfolds tears already out unhold,
smiling to hide the sadness that creeps in my mind.
Oh darling how I tried to hide the pain I feel inside,
but broke down when you said:
"She's the love of my Life"
-tes_lumieres
I . superrrr. duper. loved. your storyyyyyy madameeeeee💕 keep. going. 😘💕😘💕 Mwaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa.
I'm sooooo like Ve here, the MC of this story and I likeee Lumic alreadyyyy. I like the way your writee ittt, detailed yet simple. Keep writing :))
It's good, keep up the good job. Although has some things that needs editing but still good. :)
I enjoy the characters a lot, the conversations are great, I am laughing with them feeling emotions. Good work will like to continue to read updates.