Phantom of a Devil (BL)
Unlike every other person in this world, So Eun only dreamt of living.
In a world where gods, demons, and mortals inhabit together to strive for peace and harmony, all of that toppled over when a Phantom child was born.
And like a wimpy little flower, waving in the middle of a road bustling with people, was a reminder that being born as a Phantom, fragile as glass--was like treading on thin ice. A Phantom is forbidden to be hurt physically or emotionally, intense emotions will eventually cause him to get weak and lead to his death. A crack appears on the thin ice. One day, he met a boy named Han Min who saved him from being vanished. The most skilled fighter, became his one true friend.
Until one night, something remarkable happened that changed their lives forever.
Giving him a second chance to live, ten years had passed, and his heart was leading him to a certain evil supreme, and what he saw was just his best friend, Han Min. The innocent and honorable child who swore to protect him and his people, had long become the scourge of the heavens and a threat to the mortals.
Why do tragedies of human lives appear in disguise as simple coincidences?
After that night, what exactly had happened between them?
Witness how these two unfortunate souls found their way to untangle the twisted knot of their fate.
"After all these years, you know I would always come back to you."
Their journey begins here.
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Slow-Burn, Mystery, Pining, Fantasy, Cultivation, Heavy Angst, Betrayal, Fluff, Romance, Tragedy, Drama, Psychological, Plot Twist!
A reminder that this is BL. A lot of heart-wrenching revelation will await you by reading this.
Trust the process.
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The story starts with the author describing the ambience which is spot on. Towards the end of the first chapter alone i had goosebumps. The story is fresh . Good work Author. Keep up the good work👍
Good job, Author! You exploded my mind about the scene you're writing in every chapter. I keep on reading and here's my concern. Where is the other chapter? Hehe, I can't wait to read your new update. Fighting!
I think the description in this story is better than most of the works that I have read. The writing could use some work at times, but it's solid overall. The story does a good job of getting readers' attention quickly and steadily building up tension. It is action-packed, especially as the story progresses.
I think this book has potential to become exceedingly popular ! The characters are intriguing with the mystery of their origins. Plus, this deity system is worth noting, which I believe is your selling point, as it is what makes your novel different for me. The only thing that throws me from immersing myself fully is the grammar: run-on sentences, wrong grammar tense, and a few strange parts that I would find confusing. I tried to point some out to you, but do know I wasn’t able to recorrect everything. If you have discord, I could probably dm you there and clarify myself since it is a bit difficult to correct stuff in the app. Reason I didn’t give world background 5 stars was because I was momentarily on the wrong track of thought when I read So Eun’s point of view. Maybe I still am, which is another thing that prevents me from immersing fully. However, author, don’t get discouraged ! I’ve seen plenty of stories, and your potential is worth reading ! Don’t stop improving !
I'm not a BL fan but this story hooked me. The story kept me on going to read more and more, it's an interesting one. Love the characters, they had their own personas. Great job, author! Keep it up! 💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻
Enjoyed Reading all the Chapters so far . Desperately waiting for the upcoming chapters to come [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Wow found a new obsession 😍. I especially love the tough MC Han Min. His intriguing and dark. Please come up with the good work dear author. Sincerely craving for more.
Great premise. Story has potential and I'm excited about it. I just noticed that there's change of POV in the middle. I would suggest to stick to only one throughout. Also be careful of tense changes. Those are just minor findings that could still be improved. Content is already good. All the best, author. 👍
I love the story. I don’t usually read BL but this time, I think I will. Keep it up Author!
I absolutely loved the plot! At first, I don't understand it because the words were really difficult but that's a good sign, to be honest. You built the plot well and I think it could go well throughout the entire novel. I loved how every character developed as well! Good job and keep up the good work!
I really liked, it’s a very good story, I like all of the story development and the writing quality that was really good, so keep up and continue with what u do! I wish I could do and write stories about anything actually
Author, I'm not saying any other thing apart from"I love this" ♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️😘♥️♥️♥️♥️😘😘😍😘😘😘♥️♥️♥️😘😘😘♥️♥️😘😘😘♥️♥️😘♥️♥️😘😘😘♥️♥️😘😘😘
This is honestly a good read, though, you need to check on tenses, grammars and when to use punctuation marks. Besides those tiny mistakes, this book really gives off a BL complicated love story with a tad bit of action. Hope to see more.
It starts out very nicely and it makes you want to read some more. I will definitely continue this to see what happens next. It seems like a good work and I hope it progresses as well as it starts. Good job!
This story is beautifully written. The plot is interesting and unique. The characters and world building is excellent. Really liked your story author!