The Protector And The Four Kings
Prolog,
"[Oh sorry...I forgot to mention to Daniel, that the usage of these artifacts has a limit...You are nothing but a weak human, so if you use them too much and they will kill you] Servant said to blood-soaked Daniel, as he picked himself off the ground with the help of the Red Cross, again reverting himself, enabling himself to speak
[Why...Why me... If you are so strong, why need me] he complained again [That will be the will of the four kings, as for me, I was ordered to help you, to fight the threat which may end up dooming the entire creation] the Servent explained
Hearing this, Daniel let out a chuckle [I already told you to fuck off...but just tell me why... why did everything I ever cared about, had to be taken away from me] Daniel asked with tears appearing, tracing down his cheeks, which made him laugh [I don't know...How about you ask your God when you see him] the Servent replied and Daniel clenched his teeth [That's not an answer!] he screamed"
The story is filled with a mystery on every page. I like that the focus of the whole story is on the characters and what they are going through. although the main character feels more like a tragic villain than a hero.
Previously was on wattpad, I didn't complete reading it there though but it was amazing! The grammar used is very good and this book has great potential. It has a very interesting plot and a very unique way of writing. Keep it up!
Man the story has a slow start, but dame it quickly catches on. still don't get how an old woman was able to summon a demon or who did the footstep belonged to.
Horror and Thriller. doesn't we all love it. But this story is one of the many story I have read which has kept me glued since the first chapter. I usually don't read many chapters at once but this story kept me glued throughout. amazing work author.
I love the characters and the mystery in part of the book. also, the fact I can visit all the places told in the book. but sad how mc's lover dies a little too quickly.
even though the story is completed, there is still a lot of improvement needed. world is something which can be worked on a little bit more, but I am as the story goes on it will get better, like every other story.
what the hell is wrong with the author and why does he hate his characters so much. I mean he killed the MC whole inside a church. and then didn't stop there, had to kill his family to of course.
When I first started reading it the story seems to be going really fast, and there is a second book coming, yeah so. It looks like it's a long one.
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story and the characters are good, but the world is well the real world. it's like a hidden society and stuff. but it funny when a real place is getting destroyed.