Shane Crowfeather is a young human living in a world of orcs, elves, halflings, dwarves, and every other kind of fantasy folk under the sun. Here he tells the story of his life up to a certain point, uncertain of what the future holds.
Ok since no one had the gals to write a review, allow me to do it.
Ok, honestly I've only read the first chapter but
1 author please write shorter paragraphs, it is easier to read that way
2 the action was really packed but you didn't properly elaborate the intense feelings the MC was going through.
3 even with that the way the author is writing the surroundings is incredibly detailed
4 years ago
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eyaggelia146
It was really good. It has a good flow and a captivating start,despite its long paragraphs and lack of dialogue.Minimum grammar mistakes and overall a very pleasing reading exprerience.
Ok since no one had the gals to write a review, allow me to do it. Ok, honestly I've only read the first chapter but 1 author please write shorter paragraphs, it is easier to read that way 2 the action was really packed but you didn't properly elaborate the intense feelings the MC was going through. 3 even with that the way the author is writing the surroundings is incredibly detailed
It was really good. It has a good flow and a captivating start,despite its long paragraphs and lack of dialogue.Minimum grammar mistakes and overall a very pleasing reading exprerience.