I was desperate for marvel fanfic so i got to 55 chapter. Plot or the idea of it is good but... Characters are bad, interactions are bad, nationalism is showing its horns, unlogical things are happening (love at first sight on multiple ocasions for no reason), mc recruited weak chinese guy because he is chinese. There is a lot of iritating things going on here. They snowbaled into hate for this novel. Dunno give it a try if you want.
3 years ago
45
Daoist423242
Sometimes I reallY hate chinese novels because the way theY treat girls like a toys to be collected...Then his ability, devouring powers its boring because of how OP The mc...
3 years ago
41
camero
THIS WAS THE WORST FANFIC THAT I HAVE EVER READ IN MY 5 YEARS OF NOVEL READING
I DONT ADVISE ANYOANE TO EVEN ATEMPT THIS
EVEN READING NTR STORIES IS BETER THAN THIS
3 years ago
20
shashank_bhatt
Best Marvel fanfic I read. If you decide to translate another one then I would recommend Marvelous Dragonball though first make sure you don't drop this one.
3 years ago
7
XIANJING
the story is very good, and I hope you keep translating this fanfic until it's finished, if you want to stop please give me the real name or link of this fanfic. thank you
3 years ago
4
Higgs
I'm sorry but I really tried. I gave it so many chances but it's just terrible. The flow was bad, like he just happen to be exactly where he can meet natasha? The introduction of characters are terrible. The MC goes for SHIELD, which I find so ridiculous by the way, and flirts with natasha which doesnt seem like her character. A cold highclass assasin flirting with a potential yet dangerous asset? yet the MC goes along with it. Its like, its more focused on flirting with female characters than the story itself. Not to mention the name of the MC keeps changing. Arthur, kai, su zan??? Which is it??? I even saw an "evil demon" word there. Evil demon???? seriously??? whats next? a really nice demon???
3 years ago
2
Trafford
The story is good but the grammar is absolutely terrible... hard to read, MC is in one chapter called Su Zhan, then Arthur, and all the times he is called Kai... wording, sentence structure, verb timing, and others... it looks like translation by google translate
Altogether story is interesting, while the MC's main ability of Devour may sound clishé, it is interestingly made, he uses it to devour other abilities and evolve them...
Though the bad grammar makes it hardly enjoyable.
3 years ago
1
Nolen
I've read story with mtl(couldn't find anything else) but it was horrible. Ty for actually translating this story because its not a bad story from what I've read so far.
3 years ago
1
Francisco_Rafael
Alguien de buen corazón que diga cómo se llama la el fan fic original para terminarlo de leer que me gustó un poco y no lo encuentro please 🥺🥺🥺
hey author instead of dropping this book you could instead pause it or take a break for a month or 3 weeks and then continue the book but can you still give me the name of the book still
I was desperate for marvel fanfic so i got to 55 chapter. Plot or the idea of it is good but... Characters are bad, interactions are bad, nationalism is showing its horns, unlogical things are happening (love at first sight on multiple ocasions for no reason), mc recruited weak chinese guy because he is chinese. There is a lot of iritating things going on here. They snowbaled into hate for this novel. Dunno give it a try if you want.
Sometimes I reallY hate chinese novels because the way theY treat girls like a toys to be collected...Then his ability, devouring powers its boring because of how OP The mc...
THIS WAS THE WORST FANFIC THAT I HAVE EVER READ IN MY 5 YEARS OF NOVEL READING I DONT ADVISE ANYOANE TO EVEN ATEMPT THIS EVEN READING NTR STORIES IS BETER THAN THIS
Best Marvel fanfic I read. If you decide to translate another one then I would recommend Marvelous Dragonball though first make sure you don't drop this one.
the story is very good, and I hope you keep translating this fanfic until it's finished, if you want to stop please give me the real name or link of this fanfic. thank you
I'm sorry but I really tried. I gave it so many chances but it's just terrible. The flow was bad, like he just happen to be exactly where he can meet natasha? The introduction of characters are terrible. The MC goes for SHIELD, which I find so ridiculous by the way, and flirts with natasha which doesnt seem like her character. A cold highclass assasin flirting with a potential yet dangerous asset? yet the MC goes along with it. Its like, its more focused on flirting with female characters than the story itself. Not to mention the name of the MC keeps changing. Arthur, kai, su zan??? Which is it??? I even saw an "evil demon" word there. Evil demon???? seriously??? whats next? a really nice demon???
The story is good but the grammar is absolutely terrible... hard to read, MC is in one chapter called Su Zhan, then Arthur, and all the times he is called Kai... wording, sentence structure, verb timing, and others... it looks like translation by google translate Altogether story is interesting, while the MC's main ability of Devour may sound clishé, it is interestingly made, he uses it to devour other abilities and evolve them... Though the bad grammar makes it hardly enjoyable.
I've read story with mtl(couldn't find anything else) but it was horrible. Ty for actually translating this story because its not a bad story from what I've read so far.
Alguien de buen corazón que diga cómo se llama la el fan fic original para terminarlo de leer que me gustó un poco y no lo encuentro please 🥺🥺🥺
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hey author instead of dropping this book you could instead pause it or take a break for a month or 3 weeks and then continue the book but can you still give me the name of the book still