[BL] Priest and his guardian knights
Mature BL content, Harem Storyline Warned.
A series of adventurous stories of a priest and his guardian knights. After the evil power ambushed and invade the holy city of the continent, the Pope exhausted all his power to freeze the demon army, all the citizens inside the holy city, and himself inside the holy shield. Joyce, a just qualified priest must gather all the power shattered around the continent and march towards the evil power. Luckily he got his back supported by his intimate guardian knights. They are a bunch of charming knights, strong, muscular, strategic, intelligent, magic talented, you name it. They dispersed the evil troops on the continent one by one and Joyce’s relationships with his guardian knights were deepened. They are not just contracted to defend the evil army, they are intimate comrades and lovers.
The story is phenomenal, the characters are intriguing, the updates are regular, and the grammar is good. The writing format could use a bit of work. Mainly because the quotation system seems to be inconsistent. It's actually similar to the quotation system I use, but I found a way to make mine more consistent in one of my stories. Normally, the only thing I would say about your description is that it's great but you never describe how people look. I'll let you off the hook with that this time because you use description in several other ways that other authors don't. The description in general is excellent and you even describe how the environment looks. Feel free to look at "Avatar: Macai's Journey" if you'd like. It's one of my stories, I have a similar style to you in certain ways.
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There are spaces for the grammar improvement, but the setting seems grand and interesting. I am touched by the romance, love and trust between Joyce and Alex. Alex is kind like a perfect boyfriend and partner. This novel is not a cliche billionaire or CEO or Mafia boss plotting. It is a proper well elaborated novel based on magic background. Although Joyce indeed is a prince, but the novel is more about Joyce's self-grow, training, and adventures with his knight. Keep up writer, [img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Really love the details and build up of the story. Have never read something like this before and so i'm really intrigued by what's next. I have a few more chapters to read so, i'll see
Awesome and captivating storyline that keeps one begging for more. Keep going author. I can't wait to see more updates from you author. 😍👌👌
A very interesting story and a very unusual plot, which is part of what makes it good. Looking forward to more chapters and where the outstanding author takes this brilliant story to.
The story is good and anti mainstream, i'm so curious with the relationship between Joyce and his guardian. Highly recommended, Author [img=recommend][img=recommend]
A very powerful start,[img=recommend]A well-written book indeed keep it up Author looking forward to see more updates from you .keep it up [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Hope it is not too cheeky to rate my own work a five-star. LOL, I am the author of this book, and I hope the readers can be free to rate or comment on the novel I am writing. All comments and suggestions are appreciated.[img=recommend]
A powerful start with great image created. The plot grows so well throughout the chapters while the picture becomes clearer through those words written. Overall a great read