The Last Rising Sun (Assassin)

Meatballs 1 pound ground beef ½ pound ground veal ½ pound ground pork 2 cloves garlic, minced 2 eggs 1 cup freshly grated Romano cheese 1 ½ tablespoons chopped Italian flat leaf parsley salt and ground black pepper to taste 2 cups stale Italian bread, crumbled 1 ½ cups lukewarm water 1 cup olive oil Directions Step 1 Combine beef, veal, and pork in a large bowl. Add garlic, eggs, cheese, parsley, salt and pepper. Step 2 Blend bread crumbs into meat mixture. Slowly add the water 1/2 cup at a time. The mixture should be very moist but still hold its shape if rolled into meatballs. (I usually use about 1 1/4 cups of water). Shape into meatballs. Step 3 Heat olive oil in a large skillet. Fry meatballs in batches. When the meatball is very brown and slightly crisp remove from the heat and drain on a paper towel. (If your mixture is too wet, cover the meatballs while they are cooking so that they hold their shape better.)

It's pretty good!! But it lacks more OPPAISSSSSS! Full HAREM MODE! PLUS ULTRA!!!! [img=recommend][img=faceslap][img=recommend][img=recommend]

Review given after reading 24 chapters. Writing quality - 3/5 - Pretty sad to see the quality of writing, using he for both males and females. Story Development - 4/5 - Pretty decent but find it bland. Hinata and MC were friends, but after death of MC's family, he (MC) became a loner and thus started an awkward development between MC and Hinata (I know that Hinata is timid but still hope a bit OOC to develop harmony in team would have been great, still hope that after the B-rank mission things change). MC continually being verbally mocked by Ino was simply sad and pathetic even tho Author may have tried to make it seem that MC is apathetic and indifferent, but I do think seeing MC continually stab a villain would open her eyes to reality. Character Design - 3/5 - Sorta bland MC but has hair trigger to someone who wants to kill him. Updating Stability - 3/5 - Not sure thus giving average rating. World Background - 4/5 - Naruto World but there was mention of OC that was able to cover an Entire Village in a Genjutsu (Seems a bit unrealistic but roll with it). Overall - 3.6/5 - Have to say it is an Okay~ read.

i find that the story took a bad turn when the author chose to kill the mc family (the mc family isn't even from the uchiha), the only reason i can see is that it was for the drama and the justification of an emo mc.

So yall know, story is slow as stated in the summary which would be fine except the MC is soo boring. But atleast the story and writing was fund even if there weren't any real distended from Canon even though there was an whole additional clan of Elite tier ninja in what was essentially the warlord Era. Then around Ch 87, there comes a complete tonal shift. Really made no sense and came out of nowhere where highly trained ninjas should know better. It reeks of heavy railroading just bad storytelling. Gave it a shot till then but hopefully there will be a rewrite in the future for those who sick around

Well this story is a mess to be honest, the mc has kind of edgy personality with no motivation and intelligence, he is in a team with hinata and ino are you serious, there is no way the hokage or clan members will allow to break ino shika cho team formation and with personality of ino, it is unbearable to read. with mc purposely scoring lowest marks or doing something with his reasoning that doesn't make sense maybe it'll get better in the later chapters around after 40 chapters I guess but till then you will be fed with this story. so, I will recommend you to read star 5 to 6 chapter and then skip to straight 40th chapter.

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Good novel, the grammar is good too. I just don't understand, how can you mess up pronouns so badly. And it's not a one time thing, the pronouns are messed up in every single sentence. At this rate I will have no choice but to change my gender.... That's how bad it is.

hey author when are you correcting the genderbended words like when you are talking about MC you will sometimes use 'she/her' and when talking about girl character you use 'he/his'

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The plot is a story spelled out well. Well, the mc looks too boring, I personally am not interested in reading about a hero on whom even Sasuke Uchiha looks like a Guru of social activity.

Powiem tak jeden z lepszych powieści jakie czytałem z Universum Naruto fabuła dobra główną postać no co powiedzieć choć pokręcona to jest bardzo dobra czekam na więcej <3

Very good story. It feels like a completely different story than the original Naruto because the way the author made the mc is so good we follow him through his journey and hardships. The emotions shown by the characters is also very good as I shed some tears while reading it.