The novel starts with Derrick moving into a house with seven demons with corresponding sins: Lust, Gluttony, Greed, Sloth, Wrath, Envy and Pride. He's never been happier and learns to live his life day by day.
Derrick is your average teenager, no friends, awkward in social settings with no style whatsoever. All that changed when he moved in to a house haunted by seven demons each corresponding to the seven deadly sins, together they help.
Derrick's life begins to spiral into a crazy filled adventure as he tries to balance his newfound powers all while maintaining his principles.
One boy, seven demons. What could possibly go wrong?
You have a good story here, with an interesting concept. Although the grammar needs work, the worldbuilding could have been done better. Also, the story development for me in the early chapters was a bit foggy. Overall, good idea, and the Author just needs to grow and he would do much better. Good luck author, and hope you keep writing and improving.