They're the ones who will look up at the sky and reach out their hands.
The ones who will have the urge to jump as they look down at the depth of the abyss.
Those who will take the first step without any hesitation as they look far off the edge of the horizon.
Someone who will gaze at the Moon and dream of an adventure, dares to leave the Earth, and conquer every Dungeons.
This is the story of their adventures.
Those brave Adventurers, peculiar Magicians, valiant Knights, and proud Valkyries.
Stories of Humans, Half-Race, and Demi-Humans along with their Sub-Spirits.
Tales of Reincarnation and Dungeon along with their Dungeons' Keepers.
Their stories as they live their lives on Earth.
Their stories as they traverse the sky from dungeon to dungeon.
Their stories as they dream to reach the Moon.
Their Days of Dungeons from Earth to Moon.
I love the story growth and character uniqueness , also love the addition of comedy every now and then. Quiet a refreshing read...
Yayyyy! another book released by Mr UelUel, this will surely be good!
It is a good read, though I am confused as to what it is about? It is still good, and it has its comical moments, so it is not a dull read. Overall, it's a good read.
It's UelUel The PoruShark Writer. This novel is kinda a bit of a sequel to my first novel ...ReWorld: The DwarfCat-EaredElf... but it can be read without reading the previous novel. Enjoy reading and share it with your friends 😉
Another great story as expected! The mix of comedy every now and refreshes the experience, making me read nonstop. Another wonderful story! Waiting for new chapters~!
Your writing improve quite a bit so as the follow of the story. Keep it up.
Waiting for more chapters updates. Along with some characters design like before.
Thanks for keeping up this story. Need more updates though.
I have just read up to chapter 5, I am curious where this is going. The characters are engaging and I am already invested, I will read more as soon as I have the time for it and will surely leave another review / comment on it.
Did i ever say am a fan of this book? Because, yes. Good storyline (check) cliffhanger (check) Everything a real book requires (check) Overall: The best in the genre
Overall, this is a hard one to judge. It doesn't read like a linear story; it reads more like a collection of gags than a linear story. More details are below. The Good: It is high-energy, and the comedy bits are done quite well. We are given solid details about our trio of little girls, and it follows the common "Cute girls doing cute things" kinda trope. The prologue itself was done very well. Info dumps are also handled well, and overall, the author appears to have experience. The Bad: It is very hard to follow. The tenses jump sometimes and then settle on a strange first-person perspective that frankly doesn't work well with me. The dialogue is very fast, and I frequently lose track of who is talking. Why so many underscores? Every single underscore felt like a speed bump. Underscores serve no purpose in grammar, they were used to underline words on old typewriters. I feel like this story isn't developing towards anything, but I might be a little unfair on this point because I've only read up to chapter 11. This felt like a collection of skits mixed with a bunch of unnecessary line breaks, periods, and underscores. With a lack of story progression, I can understand a lack of character development, but it still doesn't sit well with me. The Neutral: This style of writing doesn't work well with me so I might be a little unfair in my review. I personally do not know what the plot of this story is. It feels like a slice-of-life comedy dungeon-diving mashup that actually does kinda work. I have a feeling the target of this story is young teen and preteen kids so it doesn't mesh well with me, but I'm sure others will find it enjoyable. The only advice I can think of is to consider the readers and try to work it out from our perspective, but honestly, you already have a style, and it works well with your target audience. Don't change your story to try and appeal to others like me and I'm glad to see you keeping at it!
It's a nice story but lacking in details. The introduction of characters is lacking, but I can't say much since I have only read chapter 2, which is filled with dialogue. The world-building is still non-existent. It should be around deeper into the chapters. The heavy dialogue made it look like I was reading a manga.
I love the humor the book has, it highlights some laugh out loud moments. But if I were to have some criticisms it will be that the story is quite confusing at times. However it does not detract my overall love for the book.Great book Author
What can I say. This is a good read, first off. You did a good job on the characters develop of the story and it is pretty good. I recommend this to everyone
Great story from the author, keep updating please