Before I write the synopsis, I will leave a few words for those who will read this. Initially, I did not plan to write such a big story, because this is my first experience. But gradually there were readers who read my fanfic, and I wanted to continue, and I gained more and more experience. And now the story is what it is.In the first chapters you will definitely encounter problems like those where I misspelled characters' names or something like that. In the future, all these problems with names will be corrected. But as I already wrote, this is my first experience, and so I hope you will be understanding.
Now the synopsis.
It all started with the fact that the most ordinary guy, like any other immigrant, died in his past world, and accidentally met God. Alex's wish was quite simple, he wanted a quiet life and wanted to enjoy it without facing other problems that any main characters usually experience. But as always happens, fate has other plans. Unintentionally, Alex interfered with the plans of the villains, not even suspecting where it would lead him, and what he would eventually have to face continuing his path. Just one meeting and one conversation turned Alex's life upside down, forcing him to work for the benefit of other worlds.
I'll write this right away for the stupid potatoes who will read this. This is literally my first experience in writing history and something similar. Before this, I only wrote diploma papers and term papers, not counting filling out documents at work, so I apologize in advance if something does not suit you. Enjoy reading!
First Arc: DanMachi
Second Arc: Cyberpunk: Edgerunners
Third Arc: Record of Ragnarok
The author also created a P*treon and will upload chapters to it ahead of time. Well, and maybe one of the readers would like to treat me to coffee.
The author created a p*treon just to earn money for coffee so that I could cope with my ADHD, which always prevents me from thinking normally.
All chapters on P*treon are free and all this is done with the goal of collecting donations for coffee. I will upload chapters there in whole packs of 3 chapters. My P*treon p*treon.com/GreedHunter
I decided to leave a review for myself because, as a friend of mine once said, "If you don't praise yourself, no one else will." So, I decided to praise myself for starting to write instead of just lying around and suffering from the heat. This is an ordinary story about the everyday life of a person in a fantasy world. There won't be a main character who constantly struggles and gets beaten up only to win through the power of friendship. No, the hero of this story will win instantly just because he can.
Taking the Webnovel criteria, this book's score is 3.8 for me... and I'll explain why! firstly, it is the quality of the writing, which in the first chapters is quite bad but improves as the chapters go on (obviously it did not reach an optimal level, which is why I gave it 4 stars)... the second point is the development of the story which I didn't see any real writing plan, and I feel that the author is a little lost besides things that don't make sense like Hephaestus trusting a mortal to show his cursed eye, or her not being able to see at least the properties of the Yamato sword! and the third point is character development, which I didn't feel any development in the MC or anyone in the story, in addition to the fact that we often follow some clichés from other stories like attacking Bate Loga for example
Writing quality and the premise of the story are good. sadly we have a wimpy and soft edgelord as an mc which ruins the characters and the story development... too much drama and beta edgelord behaviour...
so I've read until the og Mc bell is being gender bent (ima leave for that) but my question is, is this harem if so ⬇️
Thanks for finally making a straightforward reincarnation danmachi fic with good mc for that you deserve 5 stars.
A frustrating read…I think the story would be better if the mc was replaced, his character is at best the typical average op edgy Isekai character. I wish he was either a full-on hero, anti-hero, or fucken villain. I don't think he can be classified as any, his character is too inconsistent, or better to phrase it as the situations he's put in aren't handle well, making it feel forced and overly dramatic. I like idea of the story tho
Writing Quality is very good 5⭐, story development is average 3⭐, Character design 0⭐, Updating stability 3⭐, world Background 2⭐. For the main problem MC was to much cringe. The title is about Demon King but the reality was downgraded slave
good concept but at its core the fic is so boring .good enough if you have noting els to read.......................................................................................................
My Evaluation for this fanfic, if you want read novel with Very-OP main character and medium character development, then this fic is the best for you. Or if you want fanfic with weak-to-strong MC with complexity of Character development after that, well this fic not suitable for you. Also this fic have Harem genre with MC godlike-template, so this fic really have ending like villain face-slapping, almost of all-ending. but this fic definitely not boring one. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
mc is strongest with power of Anos and lots of face slapping and harem.
"Author-chan, I really like the book. If you have read LOTM, please add this to the book. But if you write another book in the future, please have only one partner, without a harem."
Don't believe those negative review they don't know shit. If you like canon story that never change like 95% of every fic this website authors do then this is not for you. Here MC changes and looking at canon story like: "look at me i am canon now".
The translation is super rough. Races and character names are constantly wrong.
To up the rating lol. keep up the good work author.
honestly i'm seeing alot of improvement passed the 10th chapter mark. keep up the good work author , add a little more details when explaining and try not to repeat the same sentence twice , i noticed in chapter 11 when goddess of the forge asked for an explanation the same lines were repeated , i don't know if it was a mistake or not but try not to let it happen often [img=proud]