The Daily Life of the Demon King
A couple of words from the author: after chapter 3, the writing style changes; don’t be afraid of the first two chapters, because I really screwed up there when I wrote this.
This is the story of a guy who met God and was sent to another world at will by acting according to his choice. There is no mention of training for yourself or overcoming challenges. The main character is strong from the start, and this is a light-hearted story without the darkness, betrayal and other complications often found in any work. I came up with the story myself and then corrected and translated it using ChatGPT. English is not my native language, so please forgive any mistakes.
I'll write this right away for the stupid potatoes who will read this. This is literally my first experience in writing history and something similar. Before this, I only wrote diploma papers and term papers, not counting filling out documents at work, so I apologize in advance if something does not suit you. Enjoy reading!
First Arc: DanMachi
Second Arc: Cyberpunk: Edgerunners
Third Arc: Record of Ragnarok
The author also created a P*treon and will upload chapters to it ahead of time. Well, and maybe one of the readers would like to treat me to coffee.
The author created a p*treon just to earn money for coffee so that I could cope with my ADHD, which always prevents me from thinking normally.
All chapters on P*treon are free and all this is done with the goal of collecting donations for coffee. I will upload chapters there in whole packs of 3 chapters. My P*treon p*treon.com/GreedHunter
I decided to leave a review for myself because, as a friend of mine once said, "If you don't praise yourself, no one else will." So, I decided to praise myself for starting to write instead of just lying around and suffering from the heat. This is an ordinary story about the everyday life of a person in a fantasy world. There won't be a main character who constantly struggles and gets beaten up only to win through the power of friendship. No, the hero of this story will win instantly just because he can.
Taking the Webnovel criteria, this book's score is 3.8 for me... and I'll explain why! firstly, it is the quality of the writing, which in the first chapters is quite bad but improves as the chapters go on (obviously it did not reach an optimal level, which is why I gave it 4 stars)... the second point is the development of the story which I didn't see any real writing plan, and I feel that the author is a little lost besides things that don't make sense like Hephaestus trusting a mortal to show his cursed eye, or her not being able to see at least the properties of the Yamato sword! and the third point is character development, which I didn't feel any development in the MC or anyone in the story, in addition to the fact that we often follow some clichés from other stories like attacking Bate Loga for example
so I've read until the og Mc bell is being gender bent (ima leave for that) but my question is, is this harem if so ⬇️
Writing quality and the premise of the story are good. sadly we have a wimpy and soft edgelord as an mc which ruins the characters and the story development... too much drama and beta edgelord behaviour...
Thanks for finally making a straightforward reincarnation danmachi fic with good mc for that you deserve 5 stars.
Writing Quality is very good 5⭐, story development is average 3⭐, Character design 0⭐, Updating stability 3⭐, world Background 2⭐. For the main problem MC was to much cringe. The title is about Demon King but the reality was downgraded slave
good concept but at its core the fic is so boring .good enough if you have noting els to read.......................................................................................................
mc is strongest with power of Anos and lots of face slapping and harem.
My Evaluation for this fanfic, if you want read novel with Very-OP main character and medium character development, then this fic is the best for you. Or if you want fanfic with weak-to-strong MC with complexity of Character development after that, well this fic not suitable for you. Also this fic have Harem genre with MC godlike-template, so this fic really have ending like villain face-slapping, almost of all-ending. but this fic definitely not boring one. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
To up the rating lol. keep up the good work author.
honestly i'm seeing alot of improvement passed the 10th chapter mark. keep up the good work author , add a little more details when explaining and try not to repeat the same sentence twice , i noticed in chapter 11 when goddess of the forge asked for an explanation the same lines were repeated , i don't know if it was a mistake or not but try not to let it happen often [img=proud]
On chapter 71. An interesting mc who just wants to live in peace and it's interesting to watch his development. The development of the plot is interesting, there is no stupid following the canon, but unexpected events may occur and there will be consequences from them, it will not seem like a filler. And an interesting development of the surrounding characters. I hope that it will continue to be cool, and the fic will not be abandoned.
Honestly very good book, it has of funny good laugh moments that fit in and can take you off guard which make it all the more enjoyable! - 10/10 keep up the good work 👍🫨
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keep cooking author......for the emperor