Pokémon: Starting with a Bound Entry System

can you just not mix the real world with Pokemon especially china. and the move please use the correct one🙄. hard to find a good Pokemon novel and it's ez ruin it

The novel is garbage, or rather, the translation is garbage, because you change the name of the protagonist and the female OC but not the others, are you subnormal or what? Wang Yao, Mrs. Qin, the Gym leader who appears in the first chapters, whose name I don't remember, it's absurd that you don't change them too, it breaks all the immersion.

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Un romance con un OC este fanfic es basura entonces, tantos personajes femeninos en Pokémon y mandan un OC asco me dan estos fanfic es como los que usan OC en fairy Tail como si no hubiera demasiados personajes femeninos para elegir

A SHOULD good novel, but was ruined by the authors Heavenly King 🤦‍♂️. The Plot Armor Entries was fine, but why did you put this world on your HUAXIA? and the name of the Mc and some females were Japanese. I can't anymore, so very disappointed. Pokemon world and with Entries System should be good concept, but not this kind.

Hm hm it's worth the time I spend reading it and it's quite op just don't change the name too often and it is one of the best pokemon fan fic

Antes del capítulo 29 fue perfecto, me gustó mucho, pero luego de este capítulo hubo cosas que me incomodaron, el cambio a último momento no me agradó, recién me estaba acostumbrado a las características de este mundo y el que hagan cambios de forma muy repentina me confunde, algunas cosas se dejaron de lado sin explicación y la traducción de las nuevas clasificaciones de Pokémon no estuvo bien hecha, se usa la palabra maestro dos veces, la palabra Overlord me pareció más apropiado para otro tipo de historia y el título Rey Celestial no me gusta, me hace pensar cosas extrañas como: ¿Estos Pokémon gobiernan algo?¿Pueden volar?¿Controlan el cielo? xD jaja

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one of the best pokemon works.maintain this quality and keep going

No importa que tan bueno sea un fanfic en el momento el que cruza la realidad con la ficcion(el mundo real con pokemon) se convierte en un fanfic completamente aburrido sinceramente no entiendo a esta gente a quien mierda(espero no ofender) le gustaria tener pokemon x su vecindario ? pues a mi no prefiero mil veces ir al mundo de pokemon que en un mundo parecido al nuestro con pokemon porque sinceramente el mundo de pokemon con todos y sus villanos es mas pacifico que esta mierda

A great story. surprisingly it's a very good story, i really like the pace of the story, the world building and the theme is half Pokémon with dungeons and modernity

История хорошо начиналась, но дальше становится скучно и неитересно[img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it]

As someone who reads the original version, like this translation, I can say that it adapts it wonderfully for other communities. The original Chinese version uses terminology with a meaning that ultimately contradicts itself. For me, I liked this story so much that I no longer read Pokemon fanfiction, even though I used to dislike it. P.S.: I wrote this review through a translator, so I apologize for any mistakes.