The Heaven Defying Helping System

I like the plot have potential to grow. I would like ro read next chapter soon... 👣👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍💗💗💗👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

Like your story this far, yes you will be face many critism, but dont stop, instead eat all of those, and growth !!! Keep it up man ! Your story is GREAT ! Do not drop it, finish it. You cant tell yourself as a writer, unless you finish a story, no matter good or bad it is. That is the REAL 1st step. -Your newest fan.

The plot is unique and interesting however, there are so many flaws in this novel that really lowers it's quality. First of all is the grammar. You really need to get an editor or use a program like grammarly. From run ons, punctuation problems, tense conflicts, and etc. You have pretty much every grammar error there is. Also the writing quality really isn't good. Try to follow the writing structure of the common CN novels.

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I was curious about this story due to it's usage of a rather different system. The Heavenly Helping system. The idea has the potential to go into justice and heroics and some psychological bits concerning said stuff, or at least that was my thoughts. Boy did I get my hopes up waaaay too high. The story is basically about a guy who gets op, loses his opness instantly, loses said OPness again the moment he reclaims it and soars up again. On top of this the story's plot makes absolutely no sense. The Helping System itself doesn't really ask him to do anything that doesn't have massive out of this world rewards, and finally the writing just absolutely sucks. I can't help but wonder when the Author will realize this needs some major rework. This s essentially the roughest of rough drafts I've seen in a long time. This should not be published right now.

This novel is really good I really like it hope you will update more chapters a day and make each chapter much longer 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

Mc starts out edgy and dark randomly saves a child who is apparently a gods reincarnated daughter god blesses guy before he dies by trope truck-kun he is given system system stays with him gor around less than a day while mc is out cold and power levels him beyond a resonable level then demands he saves a beast he stands uselessly beside beasts as they battle his will to be less useless makes system be useful transports the beast the beasts cub and mc randomly into the lap of fl lead mc has a adults soul in a kidish body but at first look at the female thinks i want to boink that even though shes a tween .... by then its chapter 6... also by chapter 6 you will have seen heaven heavenly or a form of heaven written down near 300 times.... there is massive typos missing words and a clear lack of context or plauseable plot line what i have encompassed for the plot line is all compressed down from near mindless jibber and random endless system typed caps and yes the system is always in caps So all in all there isnt much though process of character development of world depth or pf any sort of story line much past random wish fulfillment that the novel is clearly leading too most likely it will harem and trope to levels we can only guess

Ok I'm writing this review after reading 25 chapters. I really want to write this one after chapter 7 but I give this story a chance should name this story "HEAVEN DEFYING TRASH SYSTEM" MC is stupid why keep those who want to kill him alive? he have a system why join a sect? i don't even know what to write/comment anymore TIPS to the author PLEASE STOP WRITING

Wow,an amazing story you have there, the plot was interesting to read. Though i wished this had Japanese names or Chinese since i was rather used to that but still a selfish wish of mine

Bad. *Plot armor is ridiculous. Every conflict is resolved by relying on the system. Everything(skills, equipment, pills, exp) is gained by relying on the system, the MC does not need to work, everything is handed in a silver platter and spoon fed to him. *Needs a proofreader. Every chapter is like an essay made by a grade schooler. *Everything lacks depth, everything.

i am not going to say anything except I WANT MORE CHAPTERS thank u ............................................................................................................................................................................................................................... and please add fast cant wait

support original novel.................................................................................................................................................................... ^_^ but please author's use different title we already have tones of System titles use this Helping God/ Heaven Defying Helping God. hahaahah

Yo bro pretty good story so far. I like the MC too not to OP yet. I want to know though how often do u update ur chapters. Cuz h got me hooked.

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