Well ... basically, I'm impressed, but not positively.
The story is extremely fast, as if the author was fighting against time.
The characters have no individuality, the author has transformed the robin from a strange, close-hearted woman to a loving, dependent woman into two chapters, long before the straw hats, she runs off on her own and is betrayed at the age of eight. ..
And now, in the chapter I stopped, 3 naruto individuals randomly appear in the story, wow, just, wow, awesome!
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5 years ago
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Lolilovy
Please release more
5 years ago
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Roarrrrr
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5 years ago
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Agracia
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5 years ago
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PinGoth
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4 months ago
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Chandra_Bayu
this novel is good. but why stop? if you can continue this. then great
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4 years ago
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Piotr_Uklejewski
******************************** Good work! ******************************************
***************************** And i need more! ***************************************
Well ... basically, I'm impressed, but not positively. The story is extremely fast, as if the author was fighting against time. The characters have no individuality, the author has transformed the robin from a strange, close-hearted woman to a loving, dependent woman into two chapters, long before the straw hats, she runs off on her own and is betrayed at the age of eight. .. And now, in the chapter I stopped, 3 naruto individuals randomly appear in the story, wow, just, wow, awesome! clap clap clap
Please release more
Please don't drop it..................... Upload more chapters soon......................................................................140
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I don't have much time but. I wanted to use my remaining 1% battery to express my love and passion about this novel, although mc is a bit
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******************************** Good work! ****************************************** ***************************** And i need more! ***************************************