After an unknown amount of time, a soul got to reincarnate into a fantasy realm with it’s own choice of abilities and looks. Watch as he goes through life as powerful as can be in this weird world.
This is a hobby and not professional work so please bare with me while I try my best to make this book a good one. I would also like to put out here this is my first novel and a learning experience for me, I’m sorry if the tags aren’t right or to disappoint.
Original work by SimpleFool. Beginning is kinda rough but it gets better as the story continues.
Cover by Xenoham, if you want a commission by him, email him at the following email! LordXenoham@gmail.com
I made an edit so some author’s notes may seem odd or out of place
You just have to turn your Brian off to enjoy this novel but if you are just looking for something to pass time this is perfect.
Super good, highly recommend, the only problems I found were that there were a few grammatical errors and also the system interface gets repeated like 10 times, so the 18 chapters felt like 12
In short it's a nice isekai story from what I have read so far. In depth: Main character's personality can best be described as, an elderly person walking through a zoo. MINOR SPOILERS.. Other characters, lets takes Elva as a representative (sibling) the most striking side character. We didn't learn why she was on a high horse, just that she was, she got her ass beat and we moved on. This was a missed opportunity for character development. Though how the main character doesn't care that the dad reveals his private information, it's nice in that you recognise that the dad exists only to talk about the main character and has no other personal matters to attend to or care about. Didn't explain how the dad has the position to call a king however I shouldn't fuss because it's implicitly tells you. World Background is something that you learn as the story progresses. But as of now 3/5 there hasn't been much care on for the dragons and lizards, THE MAIN CHARACTERS RACE. He just teleported into another realm with what felt like a "oh well here is another dimension that I can freely travel to," then we go back to the starting realm like nothing even happened. That was very out of place. Just some stuff I dislike are: -familiars pets or whatever . A slime goes "Meow," like what the hell. -the unrealistic fact that he got a slime girlfriend almost instantly after meeting her. Relationships shouldn't happen that fast. I honestly hope they breakup first and to have some emotional drama ' like real people' I don't care if they get back together or not. Maybe something interesting happens and he gets with the white dragon or maybe the white dragon gets jealous and kills the slime.
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This one is good. I always feel so bored in other stories, but this one is exception. I like the story but not so, with the writing quality.
Pretty good. I like it. 👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌
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Loving this whole book so far everything is well laid out and its so engrossing. Can't wait for more chapters to come out keep up the good work
Good book!! 👌👌👌 Waiting for more chapters!!!!! ...................................................................................... Still Waiting! 😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😴😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕😕
Love the stories and characters aswell as the world design, but theres a lot of simple spelling or grammar mistakes, mostly with pronouns or stuff like Your and you're. Story is great tho:)
I really love this book and love the characters 👍
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personally i love this book its great for passing the tim it has an amazing story line out of all the novels I've read this one would have to be in the top fifteen.
Honestly it’s amazing I usually don’t like reading books that are too Detailed or with a Over powered Main character 💝 That’s all I needed to say have a nice day!