The villainess after the power
”Not everything is as it seems. You may just think, just one time, everything is alright, You have the right friends, everything is going perfectly. You will never get stabbed in the back again. But, it’s not always true. I had to learn that the hard way.
Sometimes not everything is how you want it. Not everything is perfect and, most importantly, don't always trust the people you are close to. Because you know, keep your friends close and your enemy's closer. Everyone knows that saying, I'd stick by it if you want to survive in the world you are about to be sucked into.”
Blackness. Everything is black. I can't see anything. There a light awhile away. I want to go to it but I can't. I can't get up, I have no strength.
Am I dead?
I can't be. I was just alive.
People always talk about death is being in a dark place with a light at the end of the tunnel. Maybe I am dead. But I don't want to be.
I want to go back to my friends, my family. I want to go back.
But, I guess I can't. Not in the place I am in right now. It's impossible.
Feeling the strength leave my body, my eyes close and then there's darkness, no light at the end of the tunnel.
Is this it for me?
The character design is one of my favorites! I love Hazel and how she is so stubborn! She takes what she wants. You got social anxiety a little wrong so I’d check up on that. Either way, it’s a great book!
The book has strong world building! The character design is cool and I feel like I can connect with Hazel and Charlotte! The war plot line development is good and I like how Charlotte is thinking about things before she does them!
How this book is really great! The world background and character design is great! Everything about this book is perfect, gonna add this on my recommendations list!
The World background is one of my favorites. I like how not everything revolves around Charlotte taking out Hazel.
This is a good book. It has good stability with updating and the story development is good. I like how Charlotte isn't always so focused on killing Hazel and that there are other things going on in the story!
It’s a good book. Definitely needs some work with some punctuation. I can’t really much about character development but the work background is cool and the characters have some cool personalities. Definitely recommended.
Authors shameless review. I am going to admit, my character design is not that good. My world background is pretty decent and so far, my story is deloping pretty great. The reason why I am not giving my story 5 stars is that it is not yet worthy of it. I still need a lot of work with character design and writing quality of it. Once volume one is done, I will be editing everything to hopefully make it better. Please try this novel out, I promise it is not awful.