Love On Chaos
Tears were streaming through Eli's cheeks, his eyes were bloody red, its been so long yet the pain, the aches, the memories were haunting him, he can't escape his fantasy, is he dreaming, tell him, he is because, he doesn’t know if he can win this battle, this game, played by me, her, and destiny.
Today 6th of December, its been years since they met, the most beautiful woman, the most caring, the brightest star in the sky the one he thought who’ll never leave his side, yet here he is, in their favorite place, the place where they smiled as wide as they can, laugh as hard as they could, the place where they witness the beauty of the sun descending and the gorgeousness of the moon ascending, but now, he’s alone, reminiscing the past. After waiting for the sun to set, he left there hidden spot and spoke in a low baritone voice. “I’ll hold on to your promise, my love."
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I reccomend you try to read this Novel, The novel is very interesting. I can feel the emotions written in this story. The plot plots presented are pretty good .. :)
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Very interesting and entertaining. The plot makes me excited and the characters are pretty fun! I appreciate the improvement of writing quality every chapter as well and I hope for that more. Also hope to read more works from you :)
Recommend this book to people who love romance I loved the synopsis of the story all ready 😃😃😃😃😃😃 not a waste of time 📚📚📚📚📚📚📚📚📚📚📚📚📚📚📚📚📚📚📚📚📚
The emotions, the chapters...they’re all so interesting, after I write this comment, I’m going to continue readinh this interesting yet intriguing book.
I give this book one hundred stars! There is a "to be continued" at the end so you have to read the next chapter see what's in. I can't wait to find out what happens!!! Keep it up! Goodluck!!! 👍👍👍
Once again, I'm brutally honest about my reviews so... The grammar is okay-ish and is understandable aside from the occasional lack of punctuation, minor spelling mistakes, and capitalization. I want to give it a two, but these things can be worked on. Characters aren't really fleshed out and it seemed like they just popped up to be there and do their tasks. This includes the main character. The setting wasn't clearly specified or explained which made me quite confused as I read through everything. Overall, this book can be considered as good if the above points can be worked on.
I haven't read it yet but the way how the sypnosis has begun is quite interesting . I ssuggest you read this book.Love on Chaos.It is not waste of Time I assure you
I say to you that, as a reader you don't want to miss out on this book. You have no idea quite the numbers of things you would learn. It's so obvious from the plot. Grab a cuppa, take a seat and enjoy the author's fantasy.
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Beautiful and sweet story, a must-read 🌷 The author had a refreshing writing style that made me continue reading, plus the words are easy to understand 🌻
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