Supreme Warrior of the Magic Era

Hey there! Author here. To be honest this is my first time writing so please expect mistake from me. Also, the first few chapter in the beginning would have a short word count since I was just starting at that time. Please expect an increase in word count after that. Last but not least, this is my novel so of course full star for me 😊

Though the story is great and all, the only problem I had with it was literally the grammar but everything else was fine and the story was genuinely interesting. I wish the author could spend some time looking over his work again after writing a chapter just to check for mistakes.

There is a story already written like this where the same circumstances happen and the boy gets an ancient inheritance along with a few other people. it starts off with his butler trying to kill him and he gets saved by a teacher and then on from there. idk if you're story follows that because I didnt read after it started exactly the same as the one I'm talking about. I hope it isnt copyright

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Story is great, I love the characters and the struglle the Main Character is having. But the grammar is a slight problem but it isn't a super problem. Really hope the author finishes this and not turn into like other authors who leave a story.