To walk the mist

hi guys, it is your author giving a shameless review. Thank you for trying To Walk The Mist. You will find that there are two versions of the book. This is because I got signed and the editors pulled this magic. The other is the older version that I had to delete the chapters and leave all my hard earned reviews and ratings behind. So please don't be shy to leave a review and save this author's pained soul.

Let me start off by saying that i really like the premise of this story and the characters in it. the only issue i have is with the author making everything vague and even saying it will remain that way because this is basically a side story of her published book. Now i took a look at the book but it didnt interest me because the MC is a woman and i only like reading male lead stories. This is really sad because i really think this could have been one of the greats if it was just treated as its own book rather than a side story. There aRe decent grammatical and spelling errors which are off putting and the structure of the chapters suck at times since there are no inidcatuon of time passage or author notes at the end of the chapter like you see with other novels. Sadly im dropping this after 106 chapters. it was fun while it lasted.

Despite some minor typos in the synopsis, this Novel proves to have quality writing and an engaging story despite the occasional typo or misplaced word. The Novel uses a somewhat unique take on transmigration, a Mc rather stoic in disposition as well as constitution, and an eccentric master that walks the line between genius and total insanity. 15 chapters in and I will definitely keep reading.

Really interesting so far, the world is somewhat unique but also has enough common elements to make it easy to understand. The protagonist is fairly interesting as well as the somewhat different direction of the story. The only two flaws are some spelling mistakes and that some pf the charecters are cliche’s.

absolutely loving this one so far, the author makes a great job in immersing the reader with his amazing world building skills as well as story telling. the story flows smoothly without any sort of grammatical mistakes to be spotted. as you read further and further youll fall in love with the lovely, cheerful, and well written interactions. but at the same time the book is not limited to one tone, it can be serious when it has to be, with intense scenes as well as exciting ones.

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Oh boy here we go. This nivel would deserve 4 stars if not for the bad grammar, although light novels are not measured with the same weight as full books publications, is still a big factor. The plot has its degree of originality, the secondary and antagonist characters are neither all smart and sly nor stupid and agraseve but instead they are a balanced combination of both, like in real life, there is not shortage of idiots that take actions based on instad gratification or pride, but there are also people that will think before acting and realize the benefits and dangers of situations, instead of throwing theur life loke idiots to the MC. MC is not bad, just that his apathic personality is not for everyone taste, he came to the current world when he was on a mission, he had a life and purpose back home and he wants to return, so he doesn't attach much to the people in his current world, he stopped giving a F. The world setting is quite original, yet a bit messy to understand, but I like that instead of a info dump of 5 paragraph describing the world, we get to understand it on information bits placed through the narrative, itbfeels more natural and makes sence, info dumping is something many LN and WN writers do, delivering block of info needs to be properly done or it will negatively impact your work. Finally, update stability is, well, could be better.

i've read lady wickshire before and i absolutly loved it ♥️♥️♥️ read till lady wicky about to enter the wprld tree.. i really really really want to read what happen next 🥺🥺🥺 i've read to walked the mist older version too and it's great, i loved it too.. i guess there is a connection between the two story? i haven't read this new version yet,, thought i'll write a review first then start reading 😁😁😁

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An amazing novel, love how the author uses names from his nationality instead of the usual Asian names. I haven't caught up with the book but from what I've read the characters and plots are exciting and thrilling, and I'd like to see more. I hope the author doesn't give up his work 🙏

This is one of the books I found early on when I started reading web novels. the fact that I stuck with it this long show how much I like it. The relationship between the teacher and the student captivated me and the capabilities of the student hooked me. But now, There is no teacher student, just teacher, a piece of rock for a student, and two of the most disrespectful Duo in any book. The energy manipulator I understand they had a beef in another incarnation, but the girl, I hate that woman. when everybody in the mist is losing something (Nti Anem) find themselves (Ed & Tie Nse). The girl is getting more arrogant and spiteful, while gaining without loosing and using the mist so no one can question it. Really, is creating a religion that spans across realms all it takes is to create a sect/cult. After all she just gave 14 people means to be powerful and nothing else. The Duo kept me but now without the Duo, all I've got is one guy I like being the butt of a joke for two of novel most spiteful/disrespectful characters, and to make matters worse, he's not the main character that he'll come out of it stronger but just a side character even less than the spiteful Duo.

As of this review, I have read up to chapter 102. Thus far, the story has been phenomenal. No complaints here. I thoroughly enjoy the methodical approach when it comes to explaining the backstory. The pacing sits very comfortably between unbearably slow to the point that everyone forgot (ex. Hey guys, remember this small detail about 350 chapters ago? Martial God Asura, I’m looking at you...) and way too fast to where the backstory feels like an integral parallel format of the novel. Very well done. My one and only HUGE gripe about this work is the grammar and spelling issues. They are not too common, but just plentiful enough to make you reread portions of a chapter. Big no no. 4.4 / 5 Keep up the great work, author-san.