The Apathetic Queen
Raine Peters has it all; wealth, power, reputation and even prestige. The only thing she has never had was romance. She has never known or understood what romance means and her family is getting worried about her being unable to bag a man at 26 years of age.
'Moreover with her indifferent attitude to anything other than business how could she get herself a man?' was what her mother thought daily until one day Raine appeared in front of her family with a man.
"This is Dante Moore, your son-in-law"
Her father's stern face changed for the first time in years, her mother fainted in freight, her grandmother cried tears of joy and her younger sister called her brother.
"Yo! I think Raine has gone insane..."
This is an original novel written by me. Let's journey together with Raine and Dante:-)
Hmmm, the first chapter is very interesting and I could really see it that you put all your best to express each of their emotions. I just want some more dialogs maybe if it would be fine with you ahhaha, like ohh don't mind my wishes. It's just for me its a bit short, try to add more dialogs. Also, the synopsis was made of inspiration. I wonder how did you came up with those words and end up having this kind of beautiful and unique story.
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A woman in search of love is a great topic and a woman with everything searching for love even more so. So far, the development of the story is very captivating Hope author keeps improving leaps and bounds😁😁😁
This romance has potential and the progression of the story will surely make us discover it. The heroine starts to show who she is and we like that, the style and the writing are really good, they make you feel the interactions between the characters. The background gradually takes shape and we start to meet the other main characters. We are waiting for the next part of the story to get even more hooked.
Hi author👋 Just read some chapters and here I am to share my view 💚 A great story with an interesting plot, i like everything about it so here you have 10/10 from me....... ✨ keep going with your Amazing work Good Luck💛
Okay, this was a bit unexpected. The story was actually good. It made me want to read more but I had to resist the urge otherwise, I wouldn't be able to write my own story. The plot is well written with no forced relationships or whatnot. I admired how decisive they are about getting married, it made me choke on water. Would read this again after it reaches a certain amount of chapters. Excited to know how the story would unfold. Great Job Author!
The story is amazing and engaging. The descriptions and world background is clear and well set. All characters are cool !! keep up the work , author!! Upload more chapters!![img=update][img=update]
Honest review: Nice story but sadly it failed to captivate me I'm the first three chapters due to the info dumping. 2nd chapter only had 5 lines of dialogue. Grammar is a 9 out of 10 but saying someone is beautiful doesn't really tell me how beautiful they are most especially in a novel when Description is key. You have a great writing style but it needs a bit of refining and polishing. This is common for authors on WN. No one needs a supreme talent to write. It all depends on how much time you want to invest in learning to write better. Webnovels aren't like traditional novels. I suggest you read alot of top fl books in your fav genre to get some exp. I did the same with Lord Of The Mysteries. Oh, and I suggest you read Book Of Authors. it gives more insight on how novels work here. I'm rooting for you. I just found a hidden gem author.
The starting chapter is great while the writing quality is also great. there haven't been that many grammar mistakes I had stumbled upon when reading this novel. pacing is average, not too slow and fast. world background is in the office in the first chapters but the author might expand it more. the mc of the novel has a real personality of a cold and strict CEO so there hasn't been almost any problem in this novel. Good luck to the author for writing more chapters and improving the novel further.
Well, I like the story and I have a good development speed. From my perspective, what I like is little more details and some filler scenes will also be good. But overall, starting is good.
The story is well write. When I was reading I didn't felt boredom. Everything in the book is very detailed that help me imagine what's happineing. There is only one thing I want to say to author, please add more dialong like you did in the first chapter.