Everything is fine except one glaring flaw. It's about a female si. Who reads female leads isekai's? Wanna kill an isekai fast? this is the way.
3 years ago
42
King_Of_SpaceTime
Book is Great but it seriously lacks updates its what once every 9days give or take? so if you increase updates this book should easily make it in the tops
3 years ago
12
Lirg_Yob
As of chapter 27, this story is weak. I've read the web novel and few of the light, and this is more like a copy and paste but with an OC. Instead of the MC, it's an OC that takes the MC place, I don't think Death March is a good story to write an fanfic anyways.
2 years ago
8
shaik_bhanu16
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3 years ago
2
MLakuru
This is just a copy paste of the original novel with a fmc si in the mix. Nothing really changes and nothing new happens. If you want to read this novel go find the original. This novel gives you the illusion of being decent but if you have read the original then this is just a straight copy. The mc being female doesnt really add anything fresh to an already boring world as well. I would like to repeat again that despite having a fmc the story is at least 90% identical to the original in terms of story and mc being female hardly makes a difference.
Ok I have ranted long enough about copy and paste and what not.
a year ago
1
Daoist_Jin_Zi
Hehe the mc is as annoying as the original mc
2 years ago
1
Charles_Magbual
I was very excited when I finally found this, but my excitement turns to boredom. The very first few chapters were solid as there's originality to it but after that it just followed the original plot with some slight changes, I was kinda hoping that there would be some big changes to the plot but this kinda feels like reading the original webnovel.
I'm not saying I don't like it I just thought that it could have been better.
Everything is fine except one glaring flaw. It's about a female si. Who reads female leads isekai's? Wanna kill an isekai fast? this is the way.
Book is Great but it seriously lacks updates its what once every 9days give or take? so if you increase updates this book should easily make it in the tops
As of chapter 27, this story is weak. I've read the web novel and few of the light, and this is more like a copy and paste but with an OC. Instead of the MC, it's an OC that takes the MC place, I don't think Death March is a good story to write an fanfic anyways.
good story [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
This is just a copy paste of the original novel with a fmc si in the mix. Nothing really changes and nothing new happens. If you want to read this novel go find the original. This novel gives you the illusion of being decent but if you have read the original then this is just a straight copy. The mc being female doesnt really add anything fresh to an already boring world as well. I would like to repeat again that despite having a fmc the story is at least 90% identical to the original in terms of story and mc being female hardly makes a difference. Ok I have ranted long enough about copy and paste and what not.
Hehe the mc is as annoying as the original mc
I was very excited when I finally found this, but my excitement turns to boredom. The very first few chapters were solid as there's originality to it but after that it just followed the original plot with some slight changes, I was kinda hoping that there would be some big changes to the plot but this kinda feels like reading the original webnovel. I'm not saying I don't like it I just thought that it could have been better.