TRANSMIGRATED WITH AN UNLUCKY SPACE: Systems and Caretakers
This world is vast and looks endless there are so many possibilities one can yet to imagine. Things hidden in the dark begins to surface and who would have thought there was a difference between a system and a caretaker, all these knowledge boils down to one unfortunate being called Asahel
Wherever she goes misfortune follows, it falls on both the innocent and the villain and her mood swing only makes matters worse but she's not entirely alone
"master... let's have sea food today"
a pretty being cheerfully calls out to her
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Unfortunately born, sent to live in an orphanage, rejected among the rejects and unfortunately died.
With so much misfortune befallen Asahel it's no surprise if she decided to accept such title and become a nightmare for those who seek to find fortune.
Author's note: thank you for reading my novel and adding it to your library. Although I would love to receive a comment, review or power stones as a form of encouragement
Just to inform all my dear readers that there would be no new chapters uploaded because I'm really losing my motivation...., and so I'll stock pile them while waiting for your support
Don't judge me .
I really do need that motivation, the ML is telling me to hold his scenes back until I (Author ) get some motivation
I'm pitiful I have no choice I'm also suffering a loss
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interesting and different from other transmigration story that has to do with space ☺️☺️☺️
I'm rating this book five star ✨🌟it's super interesting and filled with amazing events, can't wait to see what happens next 😍keep up the good work author you're doing great 👍
Poor girl so much jinx on her! Well I think I'm gonna love this book all the way🖤toodles recommend 10/[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
The plot seems promising and I really liked how you portrayed the situations and emotions. I love your writing style! There are som little grammar mistakes but I know you can improve it, Author! Keep it up!
Amazing story with great potential. I loved the plot, mysterious and romantic. You are doing well author. Keep up your good work. All the best dear writer...
I like that it's somewhat dark and mysterious, not your typical fantasy romance, which is refreshing. I kinda felt like I was sitting in the dark rainy forest when I was reading it but maybe I was just affected by the cover lol My only suggestion is that you improve the writing quality a little, sometimes you miss punctuation and it makes it a bit harder to read. Otherwise, great novel, keep up the good work!
Ok so I do like the sort of dark style of writing, it’s very interesting and draws you in. The first few chapters are what I read but I do love the way the author words and their characters actions. The characters feel fleshed out, the dialogue at times feels very unorganic and manufactured, the imagery is well written but can be improved. Solid work, doesn’t fail in any aspect but doesn’t excel either. But author has lots of potential to improve, I give a 4 out of 5
I like the drama and descriptions for the main character .The only thing that annoys me a little is the grammar.Over all is a good story ! Keep up !