HP: The Alchemist [DROPPED]

IT'S COOL AND ALL BUT WHY ARE YOU SHOUTING IN YOUR SYNOPSIS?

Thanks for this. This translation is much better than that other translation that was posted on this app previously, and I like how you edited out all that unnecessarily controversial stuff

Hello, It's the editor here. I am here just to reiterate that this isn't my novel. I'm just editing and translating this form its RAW. I'm doing this because I enjoyed the original story but got fed up with how bad the grammar was. I'm doing this for fun so please don't hate on me.

I don't know how and why this devolved into a racism issue, although most Chinese authors are racist, especially towards Japanese, Korean and African American races. I just quit the novel once I notice that type of stuff, you can do that too, so instead of arguing about who is the racist or not just quit the novel.

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The novel is so boring and slow that you can skip five chapters and you won't feel any difference, and for the story it doesn't exist, Just Mac and my friends talk to each other during daily activities.

Extremely slow and full of chapters with no real importance, but despite that, I consider it a good story (Google translator) ———468——— ...............................................

Bro, how do you handle the stress since I am doing the same as you? Man, to translate and research, and edit the points during storytelling and dialogue. Can you give me some advice on this gruesome journey known as MTL Madness? Love your story btw. May The Gods of Writing and The Gods of Editing bless you...

Really liking this story! The slice of life approach is very nice too, several other stories already have the MC not needing hogwarts early on but the pacing of this book seems more realistic.

It a very good novel. One of best translation in English with a good flow. I would like author to increase the frequency of chapter updates

Good read, thank you 👍 The story development is slow.

Reveal Spoiler

A pretty impressive amount of thought was put into this work. Normally, I like a bit more action in my stories but this is a refereshing change of pace. For those who tl;dr: Slice of Life in Harry Potter. The MC is the Twin Weasley age so Potter joins when the MC will be at his 3rd Year (which may possibly lead to him talking the place of Cedric Diggory.) Unlike other fanfic out there, the MC is a Gryffindor with lots of Ravenclaw traits, someone like Hermionie/Percy except less know-it-all and less stuck up. It’s been a little more over than a 100 chaps since the writing of this review (107) and boy is it hella slow, like hella slow that probably voldermort over there can resurrect himself 7 times over before the Author reaches writing the MC’s book experience in his 7th year of Hogwarts. And yes, there are info dumps on some, I would say, uncessecary information that plays a very small role in the scale of things. Info dumping was also unfortunately a thing but was removed in the later chapters and placed at the end of each chapter if you want to have a more in-depth dive on how the Author fleshed out the Harry Potter series. Also I would like to say, things that are meant to be important seem to pop up ever to when the plot is important, for example, the MC finally finds a horcrux in the form of the diadem and was enchanted by it and almost wore it until he heard the sound pings of the system going off. Yeah, he had a system, but I felt unimportant when it’s one of the key reasons he could catch up in Hogwarts. It seemed that I talked a lot of smack about this book but I actually think it’s a really good one. You can see the life of a Hogwarts student without an immortal bald man trying to kill a student every year, no phantom book unleashing a giant monster to kill students, no deranged criminal trying to kill a rat and etc. It’s very normal, and I like it that way. The side characters are super fleshed out and feels like actual people, they sometimes have their own feature chapters which I loved the Twins escape through the halls chapters. And just overall increase in quality of work as a kind of Slice of Life genre before the hectic 7 years of the chosen one

good translation and the story itself is interesting the pacing feels very slow and it can get boring to read at times but for the most part it's a good story also hands down the bast translation I have found sentences are structured properly and other then a few spots here and there that are wrong it doesn't feel like a translation