Humans' Limits
An ocean of energy, that is the universe. The source matter comes from, the foundation of everything, and there is a prerequisite to touch it.
Lucas was a soldier who almost met an unfortunate end. Fortunately, that was his chance at touching the extraordinary. But as we all know, everything has a price, and this one demands immediate payment before it can be enjoyed.
On this journey, what will Lucas find? What will he lose?
Will his character stay the same, introverted, indifferent and unmotivated?
Will his heart stay hollow or will it be filled?
And by filling it, is he opening the way for tragedies? After all, caring means risking pain when losing.
In the end, were Humans' Limits for their own good?
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Money ? Fame ? Good but transient.
The best investment would always be in oneself. We came to this world with only a soul and a body molded from energy. Unfortunately, like everything in the world, we were born shackled.
I got lucky enough to see the path so I shall seek intrinsic elevation and transcend human limits.
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A soldier almost dying in the desert
Needing to run from death after coming back to life
Forced to jump into a pit after throwing death off his ass
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"Can I at least have my heart soothed by some soft curves? They don't need to be too big."
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Till now, chapter 237, I can say that the author has done a good job, especially as a new author. The background of the world is still being unearthed, proving that he has thought about something vaster, even if it started from earth in a parallel world. The characters feel real, though some parts of the story could have been more developed. Overall, a little gem in the making, with the current arc promising actions and excitement. Author, keep up.
Hi, I would like to give myself a full score but I want to always strive to do better so... I'm personally enthused by the idea of the book and I try developing it to the best of my ability while keeping everything logical and consistent. So, I hope you guys and gals will like it. Just try my book and if you have any idea or proposal to help me improve, be my guest. Fighting !!!!
Overall, it is good and interesting. I only hope for the MC to come back sooner.
I think a tag for tragedy should be added. Christina's death was a pity, though her sacrifice did feel like what most mother would do. I promise I didn't cry. The battle that featured Alex the Spy was not bad either. Keep it up, author.