MC Transported to the world of Akame ga KILL! With my powers and body, I really like these two worlds. Can't choose between Akame or Esdes, so it'll be two.
I look forward to your stones and comments.
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There's a lot of interesting stuff, including this story.
Your questions, if any.
The author said that he has 50 chapters and Esdeath is the love interest so 5 stars immediately
This story is so confusing. Almost feels like it’s chat gpt
while I like the premise. The writing quality is not so good. the story kind of jumps around sometimes without explanation and the grammar could be better. the characters are shallow and just accept MC too easily. the story has potential if these little issues are improved on.
Author, your story had a lot of potential but it has a lot of mistakes: extremely powerful MC from the beginning, to have Esdeath and Akame in the harem it is mandatory to be brainwashed or to implode the story, Leone using her body to get information, addition of a powerful sword for MC. The story development is very forced and the characters are not being portrayed correctly. Other than that, the rest is ok. I very much doubt that this story will be successful, because its current decisions will make the public uncomfortable with changes that don't make sense and will continually create errors in the script. This isn't the first time this has happened, it's common and it always ends with the author or the audience abandoning the story.
im reading your potentially good novel just cause you have two of my top 10 best girls and top 10 favorite animes, haha your work doesnt even have to be good to have my support just as long as you dont mess things up ill always back you up. these two are the only girls the novel needs just an opinnion though
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