Naruto: The Crimson Error
Enter Sora Uzumaki, Konoha's six-year-old troublemaker extraordinaire.
Armed with a mysterious power-up system and an uncanny talent for mischief, Sora turns the ninja world upside down.
Watch as he pranks his way through the world, outwits crafty old men, and forms an unbreakable bond with his "big brother" Naruto.
With red hair, a disturbing grin, and an attitude to match, Sora brings laughter, chaos, and heart to the Naruto universe.
Get ready for outrageous pranks, unlikely friendships, and a fresh take on what it means to be a ninja in this hilarious and heartwarming adventure!
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Warning- The AI is heavy in this one, but no flowery words in every paragraph.
Sora is not directly blood-related to Naruto and is an original character(OC).
Inspired by Naruto: paws and whiskers.
Guys, I want to declare this before reading, this fic is not crackfic but rather comedy with a huge overtone initially, it has logic, Believe me, the action scenes are decent in my opinion, It gets more interesting later on, and the comedy overtone becomes undertone, so do keep that in mind before skipping this fic.
Author review here... I tried to make this fic funny... yup that's it... Really... I have nothing else left to say... I am typing this due to min-
This is a great ff with a lighthearted touch, which is quite a nice breath of fresh air compared to the other high quality Naruto fics. Hiruzen, so far, has been portrayed as a good-hearted grandpa and it would a lie to say that I am not happy with that. I am also pleasantly surprised with the writing quality, the comedic tone, the power scaling and overall vibe of the novel. In conclusion, the novel has potential to be one of the greats!!
Lol, There is a review limit of 3 for me... My plans to spam have ended before it even started....,,,,,,,,,,, Try out Part Time Employee in Konoha
It‘s confusing sometimes other people call him uzumaki to his face and he either somehow doesn’t realize he’s related to naruto or the author just didn’t write about it and it’s a plot hole for now… also I’m hoping for adamantine sealing chains lol. The story in itself is really funny, interesting and wholesome to read tho, can only recommend!!
The comedic scenes added with unthinkable twists - This is one of the best fanfics out there based on the storytelling that gets the readers on hooked which untold a great writer who made the story is a genius on making the most exciting adventurous journey in this fictional world of Naruto. All i can say is, “I loved it so much because you made it so fun and intruiging which probably tell that you are so passionate into making this story - you are def GENIUS and hella talented in writing - Has anybody told you that phrase? Anyway, i hope you are doing well!”
The story is great so far and you can tell that the author is having fun writing it. If I had to complain about something it would be the lack of explaining about the system he made and it's ins and outs. Other than that love the story so far and enjoying the update speed sometimes I find myself wishing for more
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Overall the story is okay, the humor is average at this point, monotonous in places. The character design of the protagonist is good. There is no plot in the story so far, the usual everyday life. Also creeping suspicion that there will be no at least a share of seriousness, development in the mental plane of the main character and other characters. So read if you have nothing to do, or just to relax your brain from more advanced works/fanfics. Again things can get better as the story progresses.
Crackfic at it finest. Please continue to 'at least' to be able to prank kaguya 😁
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One of the best i have read in a while. Literally dying😭
a true masterpiece, despite being a lil silly.
Really funny can't wait for more chapters.
did you write the whole story with AI????