Naruto: The Tale of an Otsutsuki

Author did a very good job apparently people thought that this was a translation if it is a translation then author did a very good job because you can’t even tell although you can tell that there is a little bit of AI, but the use of AI is into the point that the story is overwhelmed by AI is writing style.

let's say it this way: 1) the translation is excellent, no doubt about it. 2) the plot and logic in the novel itself are not particularly developed (I read 137 chapters of the original). 3) this novel does not have a complicated plot, as always in Chinese fanfics there are 2 main types of writing, either the main character gives everyone a slap at first sight, and others are stunned and idolize him, or the main character is always on the edge and gives a slap purely on the reputation from his past slaps to other characters. in this fanfic, the first type. 4) mdeee, out of nowhere and without questions appeared and he immediately ate the chakra fruit, where is the logic? 5) it's annoying that in one chapter he reflects a little on the transience of mortals and himself gets romantically close to Ten Ten as much as possible according to Chinese fanfic rules. 6) Damn, and no one cares that some puppy picked up on the street easily scattered the patriarchs of the clan specializing in taijutsu in one-two? And it also gives away that after he scattered them, joining Guy's team, he showed his combat power much lower? 7) The main character has no ambitions at all, he just follows the flow/plot, in other words, he doesn't really interfere in anything unless ordered. 8) Compared to other decent fanfics (Chinese) on Naruto, this one is about below average. 9) But I can say that the translation is excellent, respect to the translator.

Seriously, I had a small hope that it would be a good story, but as always I was wrong, very wrong. I didn't find any flaws in the quality of the translation, which I give a 10. But what made me give up on the story is its lack of logic. As soon as I finished reading the 5th chapter, I already had an idea of ​​what kind of story it was. Someone with the strength and skill that Mc has in the 5th chapter could simply run away from Konoha.

Translation is alright but nothing else really makes sense. Mc randomly appears in konoha after eating a chakra fruit in his original world. Then the hyuga want to put a caged bird seal on him but he fights and runs away, after which he keeps doing that for three years but still lives in the hyuga orphanage? Mc complains about having to stay in konoha for their resources even tho he has everything he could ever need ninjutsu wise (teleportation, six paths of rinnegan and byakugan). Shit just doesn’t make any sense

This is going be a hit or miss for people. It's a solid naruto fanfic. It all depends how many fics you have read before. If you are rather new to fics you will probably really enjoy this as there is solid writing. If you are jaded with the amount of naruto on webnovel then I don't think there is enough here to eat.

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I read the untranslated story, and I can say that it wasn't a waste of time, although certain aspects of the story lack logic, the story as a whole is fun and has a certain charm. In fact, my opinion is somewhat influenced by this story reminding me of the games I played with my brothers and cousins, along with a web series in which the protagonist was a otsutsuki in Minecraft that I watched when I was younger, in short, this novel reminds me of my childhood and how I created characters in my mind

Very good, keep it up. But you already know the romantic partner you're going to give him.