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This is a passionate story...
"Pikachu, use Thunderbolt on all the Spearows, strike from all directions!" Ash waved his right hand vigorously.
"Pikapi?" Pikachu looked at Ash with a blank face, and then looked at the dozens of Spearows that had already lost their fighting ability...
It's a story of hard work...
"Pikachu, we have to work hard, keep working hard, and finally climb to the peak that no one has ever climbed!" Ash clenched his fists and shouted full of fighting spirit!
"Pikapi?" Pikachu looked down at the foot of the mountain covered by clouds...
This is a story full of friendship!
"Misty, even if we can't travel together in the future, we are still good friends!"
"May, fuck, I believe you will be able to become the Top Coordinator!"
"Dawn, even if we can't meet again in the future, you will be one of my best friends! ..
Buena historia, pero necesita una edición, porque los primeros capítulos son un desastre confuso, es como si cortaras partes del capítulo y luego las ordenas al azar.
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need to go back over the chapters they jump around
Sinceramente parece un buen fanfic pero el hecho que se repitan capítulos o que se vuelvan a pasar las misma acciones del capítulo anterior pero con algunas diferencias una y otra vez lo hacen volverse un mal fanfic
Borderline schizophrenic story, first two chapters make no sense and after the arch changes…city names are wrong, character names sporadically change for no reason