Cultivator from the Modern World

I am the author of this novel, Cultivator in the Modern World. As I am completely shameless, I am gonna give this novel a solid 5/5. I think this will be an enjoyable read for you readers!! This book spans a variety of genre - Slice of life, Comedy, Martial arts, #bestbook, #bestoriginalnovel... Please give it a try!

Reveal Spoiler

I am not shameless. I wil not talk about this novel. explore it yourself and you will see something you like. every book has it own reader. just take your time reading this novel because it is AWESOME once you read it you want more.

It relies too much on its humor, which is a problem when it isn't funny. It's the "the MC is stupid," kind of humor, where you're supposed to laugh at the MC. However, when the mc is too dense to suffer the consequences of his own stupidity, it isn't funny. It's pathetic.

First of all thanks for all the hard work. lets star by basics: Writing Quality "4"- Its good to see all author comments inside chapters its funny it suits the story well. Grammar is nice and it keep you to read all that u actually wrote and not just scroll trow it like in some other novels your`s actually keep me to read it normally so that big plus. Stability of Upadate "4"- Would be nice to keep it stable of 7chap/week but its proly hard for you with school and other irl stuff so i wont say much just that i would be nice to see more chapters :D <3 Story Development "4"- Its a cool concept of cultivation in modern time with a sprinkle of comedy and you`r combing it quite nice. Keep up the good work with that. Character Design "4"- Would be nice to see more complex or more depth characters. But still your doing nice job for now and i like it. World Background "3"- Cant give more for real. I will for sure give more later on when more things are introduce but still imo you should put more job in this place. Ill give some examples: You named the universe and realms and i know we will find out that later on but still is he now on planet or some pagoda flying in space? All i recall reading he woke up after leaveing earth but i dont get where is he now. I know its his master place but is it a planet or spaceship ;D Maybe i missed it somehow not sure. Also try writing on paper make a map of a world in ur mind. The with that u can see background of things more stadly and work on a story from that point of view. It will be maybe easy`r for you to move from there if u got blocked. Tho imo your doing really nice job for now and i really like the book. For everyone else who is reading i give big suggestion to start reading this novel if u havent and support author somehow . Its damn good read and its really nice change of pace of common MC type of OP/EZ KILL ALL etc... this one is damn special and amusing and i like him alot. Keep up the good work man ;) Best regards Salcho

Well I don't know it may be that I didn't read it carefully but from the sinopsys he is a 16 year old .and based on the few chapters that I read I think he's retarded completely maybe i didn't read it carefully I'm saying again why ?well it's obviously his behavior

Great novel. Who knew that the mc would start cultivating due to a light novel? This is a different take on how cultivation would start, I'm definitely hooked on it!

Was Good. Better than TSK by Zhandii. My comment was too short so need more characters lsjbfdkusbdfkhbsdkhfbkshbfdkhsbdkfhbicbvkjxbicbvkjxbvibwldbfisdbkfjbskdfbhsdfbhsdbf

That's a good novel, but I think you shouln't make too much chapters, as some novels are more enjoyable when they are short. In other words, it's no good if he transcends to another plane after becoming the best in his universe, it would be unlike MC's character. Hope Author reads and understand this ! Thanks for your excellent work. Btw, I love your humor.

I really like the novel it has a different out look in cultivation world and is not guy reincarnated in another body that was trash but now he will be a genius he is a genius the moment he becomes a cultivator not in the mind tho just a genius in cultivation.

Different but good cultivation novel. Interesting to read and a pretty stable release rate. All in all a good novel :) ddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd

it looks good but can be improved specialy MC :) he is a little annoying and strory devolops so fast I think. it looks good but can be improved specialy MC :) he is a little annoying and strory devolops so fast I think. it looks good but can be improved specialy MC :) he is a little annoying and strory devolops so fast I think. it looks good but can be improved specialy MC :) he is a little annoying and strory devolops so fast I think.

One chapter so far and im actually quite excited for the next chapter the wording is cringy at times but is comical as well shows promise @ 1 chap

The quality took a tremendously steep rise in quality in Ch 1-20. The story goes into more detail about the cultivation and training process than any novel I read so far. The realism in combat techniques is decent and more than I can ask for from someone who does not train. Better than immortal mortal in every quality, characters, realism, detail, and generally what the rules for the powers of cultivators are. No pointless exposition and a flawed but likeable mc. Author puts time into his chapters and doesn't mass release in exchange for quality. I can see a rise in quality if the author puts more thought and planning into both how the mc develops his skills, interacts with others, and matures over time. Ideas are good, but execution and taking the time to break down every part of the journey in a fun and interesting way is what makes a truly unique novel. A rival / friend that pushes the mc to greater heights is 100% more interesting than the concept of talent. Please, I love your book, never give it up