very cringe novel, this is about a Saiyan god becoming a housewife and taking care of spoiled kids, a weak emotional Saiyan god who always gets triggered and emotional over everything, the MC is a snowflake who always rages and get nothing accomplished, poorly written story with no storyline, the Saiyan god become a housewife, that's the conclusion of the story, the MC is a bloated frog, all but intimidation and rage.
6 years ago
41
Horn_Dog_Sect
This cool, I recommend reading it if you've reached the point almost no passable fics are left out there. Now, to me it feels almost high quality.
6 years ago
5
StressedByHW
This type of novel is not my type since I like mc that are badass this mc is not cause he can’t even get mad at a kid and lets her do what ever she wants, like the story goes Beerus destroyed earth but where was goku? Did he die already if he did where is his children? Dead too?
6 years ago
5
Everything_Forever
Why do the MCs in fan-fics always go to DXD or Naruto or One piece? That's stupid! Stupid Stupid Stupid Stupid Stupid Stupid Stupid Stupid Stupid Stupid Stupid Stupid Stupid Stupid Stupid
6 years ago
2
Madara_Uchiha
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6 years ago
2
200000000000000011
The craze of today's writers is to pick up and add clichés to it, like MC being someone from Earth who reads and watches manga and anime, or adding useless harems to the story or this lemon **** they call, or does MC doggie. behind woman, it hurts the dignity of a man you know? And another I don't know who was the retard to say that every man's dream is harem ... my dream is to reincarnate in the immortal world in search of strength and not this garbage harem
5 years ago
1
AbsoluteCarnage
I really appreciate this work of art that has made my view of all of these animes and Manga extremely dull compared to this wonderful fanfiction. Very good.
5 years ago
1
DDax
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6 years ago
1
DaoOfCulture
The story itself is good but the grammar needs some work here and there and there are some weird... Personality shifts in the MC for no reason even if he was a Saiyan. If u watched DB you would know how most Saiyans act so that needs some work as well. If this was rewritten with a little more work here and there it would be more popular. Just my opinion don't be roastin meh.
Dude this author somehow managed to connect a lot of animes into one universe and make it understandable. There are a lot bbn of crossovers and I dont even know what's happening anymore.
5 years ago
0
200000000000000011
Trash, MC is a ****, who accepts being a doggie for a woman and a girlTrash, MC is a ****, who accepts being a doggie for a woman and a girlTrash, MC is a ****, who accepts being a doggie for a woman and a girlTrash, MC is a ****, who accepts being a doggie for a woman and a girlTrash, MC is a ****, who accepts being a doggie for a woman and a girlTrash, MC is a ****, who accepts being a doggie for a woman and a girlTrash, MC is a ****, who accepts being a doggie for a woman and a girlTrash, MC is a ****, who accepts being a doggie for a woman and a girlTrash, MC is a ****, who accepts being a doggie for a woman and a girlTrash, MC is a ****, who accepts being a doggie for a woman and a girlTrash, MC is a ****, who accepts being a doggie for a woman and a girlTrash, MC is a ****, who accepts being a doggie for a woman and a girlTrash, MC is a ****, who accepts being a doggie for a woman and a girlTrash, MC is a ****, who accepts being a doggie for a woman and a girlTrash, MC is a ****, who accepts being a doggie for a woman and a girlTrash, MC is a ****, who accepts being a doggie for a woman and a girlTrash, MC is a ****, who accepts being a doggie for a woman and a girl
Please author be clear to yourself first what you want to write....just keep on mixing other animes here and there and what's with Irene Belsherion from uzumaki clan... lol be a little more innovative.
5 years ago
0
AbsoluteCarnage
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very cringe novel, this is about a Saiyan god becoming a housewife and taking care of spoiled kids, a weak emotional Saiyan god who always gets triggered and emotional over everything, the MC is a snowflake who always rages and get nothing accomplished, poorly written story with no storyline, the Saiyan god become a housewife, that's the conclusion of the story, the MC is a bloated frog, all but intimidation and rage.
This cool, I recommend reading it if you've reached the point almost no passable fics are left out there. Now, to me it feels almost high quality.
This type of novel is not my type since I like mc that are badass this mc is not cause he can’t even get mad at a kid and lets her do what ever she wants, like the story goes Beerus destroyed earth but where was goku? Did he die already if he did where is his children? Dead too?
Why do the MCs in fan-fics always go to DXD or Naruto or One piece? That's stupid! Stupid Stupid Stupid Stupid Stupid Stupid Stupid Stupid Stupid Stupid Stupid Stupid Stupid Stupid Stupid
Reveal Spoiler
The craze of today's writers is to pick up and add clichés to it, like MC being someone from Earth who reads and watches manga and anime, or adding useless harems to the story or this lemon **** they call, or does MC doggie. behind woman, it hurts the dignity of a man you know? And another I don't know who was the retard to say that every man's dream is harem ... my dream is to reincarnate in the immortal world in search of strength and not this garbage harem
I really appreciate this work of art that has made my view of all of these animes and Manga extremely dull compared to this wonderful fanfiction. Very good.
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The story itself is good but the grammar needs some work here and there and there are some weird... Personality shifts in the MC for no reason even if he was a Saiyan. If u watched DB you would know how most Saiyans act so that needs some work as well. If this was rewritten with a little more work here and there it would be more popular. Just my opinion don't be roastin meh.
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Dude this author somehow managed to connect a lot of animes into one universe and make it understandable. There are a lot bbn of crossovers and I dont even know what's happening anymore.
Trash, MC is a ****, who accepts being a doggie for a woman and a girlTrash, MC is a ****, who accepts being a doggie for a woman and a girlTrash, MC is a ****, who accepts being a doggie for a woman and a girlTrash, MC is a ****, who accepts being a doggie for a woman and a girlTrash, MC is a ****, who accepts being a doggie for a woman and a girlTrash, MC is a ****, who accepts being a doggie for a woman and a girlTrash, MC is a ****, who accepts being a doggie for a woman and a girlTrash, MC is a ****, who accepts being a doggie for a woman and a girlTrash, MC is a ****, who accepts being a doggie for a woman and a girlTrash, MC is a ****, who accepts being a doggie for a woman and a girlTrash, MC is a ****, who accepts being a doggie for a woman and a girlTrash, MC is a ****, who accepts being a doggie for a woman and a girlTrash, MC is a ****, who accepts being a doggie for a woman and a girlTrash, MC is a ****, who accepts being a doggie for a woman and a girlTrash, MC is a ****, who accepts being a doggie for a woman and a girlTrash, MC is a ****, who accepts being a doggie for a woman and a girlTrash, MC is a ****, who accepts being a doggie for a woman and a girl
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Please author be clear to yourself first what you want to write....just keep on mixing other animes here and there and what's with Irene Belsherion from uzumaki clan... lol be a little more innovative.
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