I know is a little bit early for a review but the autor did a good job with the forme life of the MC ,nice description for his past life and believebal at the same time... A little comedy in the 2nd chapter which is always welcomed and nice...the system is described quite well and the summon thing is well thought with the grey card limited summon and the black one permanent but he can unsummon them so is not a bad thing especialy with his infinte power points....Grammar is quite good<3...nice novel hope he will keep uploading:D
5 years ago
5
GrimsReaper
The story is really good, definitely lived up to the OP MC, but that’s good. The way the system was created is awesome, and MC isn’t a little *****. Story has a decent background, but slow release rate, but that’s to be expected. Keep up the good work.
5 years ago
1
Ivinok
Very good novel can't wait to see where it goes. Don't drop it.
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5 years ago
6
Lord_Lightnint2
don't drop it, keep up this great story. . .
5 years ago
6
Myriad
Truly good, if you like One Piece fanfics, or transmigration fanfics, or fanfics with OP systems, read this, I highly recommend it. Most One Piece fanfics, especially transmigration ones, have poor grammar or are machine translated, but this one is clearly written by someone with an excellent grasp of the english language. Even though the characters are OP (as the author clearly warns in the synopsis and the auxiliary chapters), the story is still interesting! I just hope the author's writer's block gets solved; at the time of writing this review, there have been no updates to this story for 11 months. But don't let that discourage you from reading it, I read the entire thing in one sitting and can't wait for more!
3 years ago
2
creator_0f_worlds
I love it I totally recommend this for every one 😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁🦸♂️🦸♀️🎂🦸♀️🦸♀️
5 years ago
2
m3gah1tss
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5 years ago
2
voidragon12
good novel
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5 years ago
2
I_HATE_INCENT_
This is one of the best fan fic I have ever seen,.........pls keep up the good work and pls done DROP.........✅✅✅✅✅✅👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👊👊👊👊👊👊🏼👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊
4 years ago
1
4bidienkingdom
I hope MC get title strongest in world n rulling world.
5 years ago
1
SINU
Don't ever thing about dropping
Take time but not too long
But keep going
Best of luck.
5 years ago
1
Ttnumber2
I just finished reading this and I have to say it was excellent can’t wait for mor to come 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄
5 years ago
1
GH0STS
I am shamelessly rating my story don't mind me hehe
Please write a review I don't care if its good or bad.
Basically a 17 year old is accidentally killed by an angel and is transmigrated into the one piece universe with an overpowered system. I might add a few lemons... most likely not though. I have family reading this and it may be a bit awkward if I write lemons. I will think it over more as the story goes on. Anyway I hope you enjoy.
P.S. The updates will be sporadic because I have a full-time job and I do this as a hobby....I also tend to procrastinate a lot :D
5 years ago
1
JunRaya
Everything is good so far but having a hard time reading since everything is in chunks. It doesnt really both me since I can such pay attention more but would be better if it wasnt all stuck together
4 years ago
0
The_Tube
LOVE THE NEW CHP!!!
KEEP EM COMING!!!
PLIZ UPDATE MORE FREQUENTLY IF YOU CAN!!!
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I know is a little bit early for a review but the autor did a good job with the forme life of the MC ,nice description for his past life and believebal at the same time... A little comedy in the 2nd chapter which is always welcomed and nice...the system is described quite well and the summon thing is well thought with the grey card limited summon and the black one permanent but he can unsummon them so is not a bad thing especialy with his infinte power points....Grammar is quite good<3...nice novel hope he will keep uploading:D
The story is really good, definitely lived up to the OP MC, but that’s good. The way the system was created is awesome, and MC isn’t a little *****. Story has a decent background, but slow release rate, but that’s to be expected. Keep up the good work.
Very good novel can't wait to see where it goes. Don't drop it. 140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140140
don't drop it, keep up this great story. . .
Truly good, if you like One Piece fanfics, or transmigration fanfics, or fanfics with OP systems, read this, I highly recommend it. Most One Piece fanfics, especially transmigration ones, have poor grammar or are machine translated, but this one is clearly written by someone with an excellent grasp of the english language. Even though the characters are OP (as the author clearly warns in the synopsis and the auxiliary chapters), the story is still interesting! I just hope the author's writer's block gets solved; at the time of writing this review, there have been no updates to this story for 11 months. But don't let that discourage you from reading it, I read the entire thing in one sitting and can't wait for more!
I love it I totally recommend this for every one 😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁🦸♂️🦸♀️🎂🦸♀️🦸♀️
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This is one of the best fan fic I have ever seen,.........pls keep up the good work and pls done DROP.........✅✅✅✅✅✅👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👊👊👊👊👊👊🏼👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊
I hope MC get title strongest in world n rulling world.
Don't ever thing about dropping Take time but not too long But keep going Best of luck.
I just finished reading this and I have to say it was excellent can’t wait for mor to come 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄
I am shamelessly rating my story don't mind me hehe Please write a review I don't care if its good or bad. Basically a 17 year old is accidentally killed by an angel and is transmigrated into the one piece universe with an overpowered system. I might add a few lemons... most likely not though. I have family reading this and it may be a bit awkward if I write lemons. I will think it over more as the story goes on. Anyway I hope you enjoy. P.S. The updates will be sporadic because I have a full-time job and I do this as a hobby....I also tend to procrastinate a lot :D
Everything is good so far but having a hard time reading since everything is in chunks. It doesnt really both me since I can such pay attention more but would be better if it wasnt all stuck together
LOVE THE NEW CHP!!! KEEP EM COMING!!! PLIZ UPDATE MORE FREQUENTLY IF YOU CAN!!! ....................................................................