Water&Rain Don't Mix

Hi, just wanted to say thank you for all the amazing reviews everyone has been giving me so far including the ones that aren't written here below me. It's my first shot at writing for real and I am dedicating myself as much as I can to this and I love to have critical but constructive comments about my work and if you think something doesn't make sense or you need something explained or you think I should change something any suggestions I am open to all of these. If you have anything to say just, you know send me a message either on here or Instagram or discord whichever you prefer and it's easier for you! heck, you can even e-mail me for all I care and I will still reply to you! <3 Hugs and Love, pboca.

I would give this a three tho I give it two due to me finding this through your self-promo. So- let's get started, the grammar is in between horrible and subpar and it shows the author's lack of experience with writing. The update rate is pretty decent from what I can tell, a small mini-hiatus is happening. Story development-wise, this story sucks, I suppose some could like it, but for me, it feels lacking in emotion and storytelling. The world-building/background felt extremely lacking for me and I could not understand several things and the plot is incredibly rushed. Moral of the story: Shameless self-promoting author, bad grammar, the story development felt lacking and was hard to enjoy or keep up with, relatively stable update schedule, and finally- really sucky world building TLDR: I would not recommend it.

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This is a great book of all time! I like the story progress and how the characters portrayed their roles very well. Congrats author![img=recommend]

This story needs to be appreciated more! I love the plot, the character design, and the twists! Surely you would not want to miss such a story like this! I recommend this to everyone out there in the world! YOU WILL NOT REGRET IT! I pramise ya dude! This things is super amazing that it just lures people to stay and read! I love it so much that if I have a thousand dollars, I would give it! Wish you the best luck sir/miss author! I see a bright future ahead! ♥

Very interesting read so far! The characters and central ideas of the elements are all well established, and the storytelling with dungeons and plot points keeps me constantly intrigued! Really incredible so far!

I like the chapters so far because they are very good and explanitory I've said to some other authors that they should explain their feelings to get the reader but the feelings is already inside the dialogue. Keep this up, it'll help

Im really enjoying the novel so far. Its getting interesting and i appreciate the non mainstream things. The novel has plenty potencial IMO.

You know it's an interesting dungeon-world when they offer to deliver your rewards directly to your house! I really like the focus on differentiating Rain vs Water Elementals.

Very good story, fun to read. The characters are easy to connect with, and I loved the "grass" dungeon. Every chapter I read makes me want to know what happens next. The world building is fine, even though there are some plot holes (pboca forgot). Recommend this to anyone who just wants a good fun read! :D

Really really good story, character development, and also side characters (although there are still few). Keep up the good work!!!