Metanoia - The Age of Innocence
This argument grew from nowhere into an outrage. In my rage, I was blind to her, to the graceful parts of her heart. I assumed I was right when I had no reason to. The words she spoke with such intentioned purity triggered something inside of me that came from fear. The words that calmed her, scared me. The words that calmed me, scared her. We were opponents, suddenly blind to each other's good hearts and building walls instead of bridges.
She stood up, and ran out. It all felt like a sudden daydream, her eyes looking back at me so glassy, so anxious, and I felt paralyzed. I put the drink on my mouth and finished it again. I heard the barkeeper coming back and ordered another one. I hated it when again, she had to think about if she still loved me.
Melea&Taylor. Two strangers on their way to a horrific crime learn to fall in love again.
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Excellent start -- very poetic! It captured the characters thoughts and emotions excellently. I was also surprised about the development of the story - first I was more invested in the characters emotions but now I'm more focused on the storyline itself and how it will develop further. I do not like all of the characters because I think some could be more developed, but overall I really like the book, especially if you are into some love drama!