System Break
What happens when you have nothing to lose, so you agree to become a subject in a sketchy experiment.
What happens when this experiment ends up being a game and you're an alpha tester.
What if the game wasn't in a computer but (spoiler free)
What if the Alpha testers are helping create the system the game is based on.
I was a brash kid and after getting a war wound I became a bitter bastard. I was given a second chance at life because of something called a high qi-count. I could die, but it's all good cos my current situation sucks.
I am Benzhi and this is my story. PS I had nfi what I was in for.
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No shameless author review. I want the readers to have their say.
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Something about the Author.
Under my pen name Skully I have been writing online web serials since 2017.
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I fell in love with a couple of stories, TKA and Savage Divinity and thought I'd give it a try in mid 2017. My first story was Hardcore Qi Worlds which was published on Gravity Tales and Royal Road. One of only 2 or 3 originals on Gravity Tales.
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I felt like I made a lot of mistakes and there was a distinct lack of modern sci-fi so I started Daedalus in 2018. I published it on here under Skully_ and on Royal Road.
It's now on Amazon as 4 books and the 5th will come out this year.
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This year I'm writing a lot more than last year. I have Spiritmaster which will go on to Kindle Vella and Amazon. And System Break is designed for webnovel.
I plan to write 1,000 chapters for System Break before its completed and the major arcs are planned. At the 6 month mark I plan to have 380+ chapters.
This is a master piece perfect world building combined with well fleshed out and realistic characters all shown to us threw a deep and impresive vocabulary that makes you hang off every paragraph and word. A update speed that is impresivley fast and a unique story idea makes this my favorite work on web novel and I would compare to such books as Harry Potter or the lord of the rings. This book is definitley a fun read and I would suggest it to anyone over 18. Thank you author for your consistent update speed and for writing such a amazing book, lots of love from a new fan.
Simply, I like it. This one gets to the standards of pro American novels, edited and with good author who can drive the story with exciting adventures. Mixing Qi and Elves (I know they are not but...) inside Game like world is interesting concept I didn't find elsewhere. MC is likable black guy with good experience before getting to another world and doesn't dwell on "it's a game" mindset. I would like more engagement from side characters (elves) but that is really me being picky. There are only two cons, occasional typos (very, very few) and that is doesn't have 700+ chaps already. I come here after Phoenix Phire, which is of similar concept and I would recommend to everyone here hungry something like this.
Its got all the ticks and tacks one looks for. Its got at least one or two chapters a day, with the author randomly going screw it and releasing 10 chapters in 15 minutes. Its got a truly fantastic story, unique with plenty of fun pieces. Its got a little NSFW but its never really the main point of the book and is less explicit than other books, a nice change. Finally the character development is very nice, with each character feeling unique enough to be able to not have to even know their names you can recognise them by their actions, while also still putting the focus on our main character. Long story short; its good you should try it!
It's actually surprising how easily you can sink into the story .I highly recommend this book if you're a fan of Eastern fantasy but not the too unrealistic kind . it's just right
Overall, a very good novel. There’s a nice ratio of serious and lewd chapters, the characters are well-developed, serious thought went into the world design and organizations, and there’s a constant desire to read the next chapter. There are the occasional word-choice errors (scoffed used in lieu of scarfed regarding food is one semi-frequent mistake), but they’re few and far between.
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Another very well written story by Skully. good worldbuilding, character development and writing tone contribute to a great novel. The system aspects are also very well balanced so that they add to the story, rather than taking away.
Just thought you desereved a quick review, this book has a well thoughtout story which captivates. it causes you to need to continue reading like an addiction :) Anyways really recommend !!! Keep up the good work
Wonderful! The best game or litrpg novel I've read in ages. ............ Pacing is brilliant. Character development is really good, I have a very clear image of the characters and their personality. World background is hidden on purpose, its part of the mystery and is revealed slowly with chapter progression. ............ The author turns standard tropes of classic fantasy races on their head. It's a very unique reading experience as he completely destroys the preconceived image of things. ............ The author uses the adult content as a device to tell the story and its inkeeping with the characters. There's no forcing which is refreshing. ............ I highly recommend you give it a try. Its better than most of the litrpg ive read on amazon.
Wonderful story.. I wonder when this story will run with this early elf of or barbarian with this other name.. Well still mystery with bankground story will this make vr or will this make transmigrator.. Overall good great and grand..
Its pretty unique. Elf time
This is a good story and the pace is very good. Read it for what is a story, not your personal made up event. i get tired of poeple telling authors how to write their story. This is a awesome read and should be getting more hype. Two thumbs up and keep it going Author-sama…. Oh ya drinks on me served by her. Back off buddy, she is MINE. LOL starts fist fight just because a little brawl always make the drinking better.
There are only a few chapters, but besides a few minor mistakes in the plot that could easily be the result of forgetting what was written in a previous chapter, it can be seen that the writing quality and plot are well formed. The MC is a little dumb, but its on purpose in this one. Read the book if you want to know more!!
Really like story especially love plot and wish you success. Currently, the only problem is mistakes in sentences, such as using the same word twice when it is enough to do it once(like - You do you.).
I really wanted to write a good review, but I just suck at thinking of words that convey my thoughts. So yeah... exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp. Currently on chapter 70 Very nice so far.