Grand Foreigner

Hey, it's my work, hard to be objective here! Writing is pretty good, I really like the characters I make, but the update schedule really isn't that stable as I would've prefered it, heh

I only read a few chapters and it basically was "yes I can solve this problem easily with my powers but I don't want to for some reason. I am cautious. I don't want them to know I'm very op because reasons. I can solve this situation but I'll turn into a skeleton I feel no discomfort being a skeleton and feels equally as comfortable as my huamn skin and stuff but I don't want to. yes this is a problem that I can solve easily and it won't even turn me into a skeleton but I'm not going to as it will show my large power. yes I have large power and can do lots with it but I'm going to stay here because it'll turn me into a skeleton.

I was just randomly roaming around searching for a good ff when I saw this. At first I read it just because of Overlord X FGO ff but after I read it, I was amazed by how author has represented and developed this story. Through its perfect, it was not able to represent the real behaviour of Momonga but mistakes are accential path to development. Hope author continues the ff.

Ainz is so weak a lot of useless info just to make the chapter longer what a trash fanfic .........,...............................................

Please change the flow of the fanfic, you're already approaching a hundred chapters yet nothing seems to amuse me at this point. MC doesn't change, either in personality, power, or appearance. The fanfic still goes like the original Grand Order. MC is well. . . MC yet nothing truly releases his true intent. Like sure, MC is somewhat of a coward who is often misunderstood and still thinks of the current world as Yggdrasil. . . A mf game in his past life. Doesn't MC suppose to develop new emotions throughout the story? MC feels emotionless and forced to interact with others. Interactions between characters are also less because the majority of the chapter is filled with information garbage that literally almost every reader knows. If the author can't really change the whole flow of the fanfic. . . Then I'm sorry but this fanfic would go to the garbage dump.

Honestly, this is one of the more well developed and well written fanfictions I could find. This statement is not inclusive to overlord fanfictions but for every fanfiction I've read so far. The author stays true to the personalities of the characters, especially Ainz, and gives you a sense of anticipation and suspense for what's coming next. There are more chapters on fanfiction so you should head over there and read the story. If you like the story be sure to support the author! Im pretty sure full access to chapters is only $2 a month which is a steal for the quality provided.

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I don't like the way the story is progressing and the novel is hard to read. I can't clearly understand the story, maybe I am not proficient in it.

im pretty sure there is a decent story in this but a few chapters in and you don't really have a clue whats happening. momonga being reincarnated too many times and he's back to having a real body but he's losing his body? his emotions are fighting him but he closes them off? the world is exploding and shifting, people are transforming. its just a bit convoluted and not organized or explained well at all. a lot to take in with nothing to really go off.

Ainz is so weak a lot of useless info just to make the chapter longer what a trash fanfic .........,...............................................

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I thought it's good in first 20 chapters.And then later I found it incresingly boring more and more. Unnecessary and almost repetitive info dumps at the end of the chapters makes it worst.

Ainz is super weak for no reason other then plot convenience. Ainz is super cautious more then every in the overlord series. Ainz lets his servants die (tho they can come back) which he would never do in actual overlord since he sees them as simular to his actual comrades from his guild. Ainz also won't use his true power ever even if it could solve it. Ainz is also a good guy which personally i don't mind however he should be more simular to an antihero then a hero due to his experience in the game i can't spell. he also doesn't use his overlord body ever even if it won't hurt him