The new Ferret(Harry Potter)

"This is some Xianxia ꜱʜɪᴛ.............................................................................................................................. I don't hate it."

This looks good so far. interesting concept. excited to read more. This looks good so far. interesting concept. excited to read more.This looks good so far. interesting concept. excited to read more.

pls continue . . . .

sauce?......................................................................................................................................

I like the idea and what I think the plot is. But the writing is just not what I expected, so I think it would be better to read this story with an open mind

Writing quality is 2.5/5 The story is a idea verygood. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=fp][img=fp]

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It has improved the last chapters, you can see the effort of the author. [img=coins][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp]

Author, do you use google docs? [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

Interesante historia. Quizás hacer los capítulos cortos, para tener mas capítulos en el libro. [img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]