Arrogant Billionaire's Innocent beauty
Eva Marshall is a miserable girl. Her parents were murdered. After her parents' death, she had miserable life but when she joined Radio her life changed at once.
John is a successful billionaire. His business spread all over the world. He is the owner of black and white. He converts dust into precious gold. His mother committed suicide due to a pang of guilt.
Henry is Mafia's boss. He loves Eva but she rejected him. As a reaction he kidnapped Eva. But it is all in vain Eva still dismissed him because he is the Mafia's boss he plays with the life of innocent people.
Roger is Henry's right hand and he can do everything for him. He is Loyal to his boss.
Brown is a Gang owner, he is the right hand of the devil John. Once his gang jumped into John's house to escape from the police. But John saves them from the police.
Merry is Ava's best friend. Ava has a good relationship with Merry's family.
"John, What are you doing?"
"Hush, Let me see where that bastard touched you," he pushed the messy hair behind her earlobe, "no one is allowed to touch my wife."
"I... am not... your... wife..."
"Dare Eva, I say it again, you'll soon find yourself in that bed under me and I promise, you won't have a moment's rest until morning."
Strengths: The story is lit! I am impressed with how my emotions were played like an instrument. Narration is also good and without obvious errors. I like the MC, she's brave 😊 pacing is good, and grammar is good 👍 Weakness: Your synopsis is all over the place. It needs to talk about your novel and works as well as promote your work. Key points that the readers need to look forward to and as well as omit the confusing and unnecessary info. Welp, you're good to go! Have a nice day 😊
It was so pleasant to read! Every word flows into the narration beautifully. An attractive plot. Keep up the good work! All the best of luck to you.. Will be looking forward to your masterpiece.[img=recommend]
I love the story. I love how the writer has described her characters. It has an amazing storyline and I would definitely want to read more. Will be waiting for you to update more chapters. keep it up dear author.
The story is remarkable. the plot is good. characters are well managed. anyone can b addicted really. I strongly recommend it. I hope I find more new chapters soon.
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Nice story and it also have a lots of side characters which l love the most in a novel..... Keep going author.... And try to upload more so that l can read more.... All the best ......
I like this novel, especially the first chapter, whereas for a reader, the author successfully made me feel what the FL is feeling, and that is a big star for an author. I am looking froward for more chapters author! Please keep updating more! Great Job!
your plot idea is amazing. Although I've come across many like this, this one has a unique taste to it. Keep writing. I'll continue to cheer you on!
The story is remarkable. the plot is good. characters are well managed. anyone can b addicted really. I strongly recommend it. I hope I find more new chapters soon.
This story is wonderful I have addicted no doubt. The book cover shows true passion and true love. the start is superb no doubt I love it. keep it up and published more..
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Great start, I would love to read more and learn how Eva's life changes for the better. keep going author.
It's really soooo nice.... I really can't explain this in words. The plot is way too out of words. It's story development...character development are way too nice. keep going Author.🤗🤗
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