I WANT THE DEVIL NOT THE VAMPIRE
WSA 2023
A demonic knight in shining armor or a mysterious but lovable palace guard? This was the dilemma Sage, the handmaid to the princess of Aeradon was stuck in.
While the former loathed her despite she having feelings for him, the latter was in love with her, but Sage didn't reciprocate his love.
In a sudden attack on their kingdom, the Princess was captured and in an attempt to rescue her, alongside both men, Sage fell in their clutches too and was taken to another kingdom.
However, she found favor in the sight of the king and seized it as an opportunity to uncover the reason behind their kidnapper and sudden attack.
But amidst all these, both knight and guard clashed in a battle to win her heart, which took an unexpected turn and led to the revelation of astonishing secrets.
Now the question remains, will she let the handsome knight emerge victorious in the battle for her love, or give room for the palace guard to secure her heart?
Cover photo was found on Pinterest.
A gifted writer he is, although I am not a fan of first person writing, I couldn't see this and just look away, the way the writer takes his time to explain the details really shows the amount of time and effort that was put into the work. Good job and keep it up, looking forward to more chapters.
Going to be viral✌️... Keep up best writer.
It is a nice, soft novel. I have not gotten to the Romance part yet, but by the atmosphere presented you could tell without looking at the tags. There may be some gramatical errors here and there, but its not very noticeable. The updates come in regularly as well. ^^
Alright here we go: 1) The author's storytelling reads quite smoothly, the scene transitioning is done well 2)Although the grammar might need a little work, it doesnt disrupt the narrative of the story so its readable with above average quality 3)Glimpses of each character's personality is shown quite prominently, so characters are not one dimensional 4)The conflicts and relationships between certain characters makes it thrilling,as well as the mysteries created subtly along the way are good enough to keep the reader engaged. this work definitely has a lot of potential, best of luck
Gotta love a good homicidal love triangle. I think the writing quality is good, just has the odd sentence or two. I would love to learn a bit more about the world the novel is set up in, even if it focuses on a royal handmaiden and her suitors. The introduction of the witch also brings magic into the mix, and I look forward to how that affects the story. I can see great potential, and I hope that the author can take this story to the next level.
Love the first chapter already, character personalization is great, the story already has my full attention, imma dive in for more!
I like first person writing, but not in present tense. There are a lot of grammatical issues like putting past a nd present tense words in the same sentence and merging sentences together. Otherwise, it is an enjoyable read with an interesting plot.
Although there are a few grammatical errors, it can be overlooked as it doesn’t affect the story telling in the least. The caharacters are decently fleshed out, imo. Definitely worth the read! Keep up the good work, author!