So far I’m really enjoying the mc and the decisions he’s making. the only slight problem there is the grammar at times is bad. But Overall really good.
6 months ago
3
kingGenovaGodfrey
this story is interesting and the way the vrmmo works reminds me of overlord anime but the grammar and spelling mistakes need to be fixed if you want readers to stay reading in the start and so on chapters you need to edit
21 days ago
0
Aidan_1
The story and plot is good, but the main turnoff for me is the bad spelling and grammar.
2 months ago
0
Izuna_lavu
The story was great at the begining ( and still is ) i first cheked the chimera part not because i was stupid. Overall its a good story, but i dont have coins to buy chapters so this goes only for the free ones, but i know the author is doing well up to this point.
3 months ago
0
Ninja_Hobbit
if it wasn't for the grammar and spelling this would be a better read
5 months ago
0
Harume_V2
World background is slightly okay in my opinion, the rest though could use some work
So far I’m really enjoying the mc and the decisions he’s making. the only slight problem there is the grammar at times is bad. But Overall really good.
this story is interesting and the way the vrmmo works reminds me of overlord anime but the grammar and spelling mistakes need to be fixed if you want readers to stay reading in the start and so on chapters you need to edit
The story and plot is good, but the main turnoff for me is the bad spelling and grammar.
The story was great at the begining ( and still is ) i first cheked the chimera part not because i was stupid. Overall its a good story, but i dont have coins to buy chapters so this goes only for the free ones, but i know the author is doing well up to this point.
if it wasn't for the grammar and spelling this would be a better read
World background is slightly okay in my opinion, the rest though could use some work