One piece: Establishing a Pirate Family

Charlotte is a 100% woman name.... Better luck next time in choosing a translate name. Feel kind of confusing.

Please change his name bro, Charolette is definetly a girls name. Unless that’s his last name like Charolette Katakuri or Charolette Linlin. Other then that it’s good

This can be called a family fanfic, after I saw the Chinese version, MC has a total of 29 children, 2 children have the aura of a king, emperor and esdhet, but MC is more directed towards the development of the story,so it looks good, unlike the MC Harem pokemon where the story is more about sex with the Harem, and I think this image is more suitable for the MC with yellow hair and a big sword😂

Can't anymore, not only is MC turning into an arrogant asshole every time gets the smallest of power, but his going around kidnapping or just raping girls to have his kids and it's turns into this whole stockholm syndrome thing with the girls. WTF

you have zero excuses to justify keeping the name Charlotte. i can't read it like this. literally any name would be better. seriously.

The first 40-50 chapters are good, at that point the mc is one of the strongest and it felt like it was time for the story to progress, but the author drags on and on endlessly with boring things instead of developing the plot. I'm at 72 chapters, the time si still at the Rocks era and he is still part of their crew, and for the last 10-20 chapters he has been on a trip to get a sword from one of the weakest seas, it's boring, uninteresting and just wasting chapters. I'll skip ahead, maybe the story gets interesting later on. I'm waiting for what was promised in the synopsis, that he will establish a crew of his own family and children.

I am loving this fic It has almost all the things I want from a one piece fan fic

good story with proper strength development liked it.

That definitely is a woman's name and not the correct translation

the First 40-50 chapters are good but Afterwards IT fest To short and there IS Not so much Story development and the chapters are shorter it's okay give IT a read

you shoild probably twll how shitty of a person he is in the summary or tags because he is a hypocritical murder hobo who has "morality". Congratulations dude you dont kill civilians, you just steal from them faint them and probably leave them to die. Not to mentiob what he did to that poor shrine maiden.

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