The Unknown Beauty

This needs an editor. The story is interesting to me, but the writing quality is low. Edit the story for consistency, grammar, and spelling. Make an appendix with the power levels, so people can look a that before the chapter where the MC explains the power levels to her new students. Also the people other than the MC will need descriptions. Names, ages, gender and power levels are all that is discussed. In order to keep track of characters I need more than that to visualize them. Otherwise the names just blur together and I can't differentiate them.

Love it! Overall a vary good story/novel. Writing is solid with only few mistakes. Very fleshed out story, characters and world story. My only concern is with some characters. It is hard to remember all of them. My advice for You is this: It is of great help for the author to have a notebook with all characters( their history, character, relationship, etc.). With it You can make some sort of glossary for Your novel. Then You can put it somewhere for us( readers).

Awesome cant wait for more chapters to come. The main character is strong will i cant wait for her to grow. She will be the strongest when her power grow im get excited cant wait.

It's an interesting story! I hope others love it like I do! And look forward to seeing what happens next in this very interesting and intriguing novel! ❤❤❤❤❤ Thank you Author and translators! MORE PLEASE MORE!!!!!!

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This seems like an interesting read so I decide to pick it up. I wasn't disappointed since many story have something cliche about them. But it has a good plot so I want to say keep up the good work🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰👍👍👍👍👍👍

I really super enjoyed this read because of the female leads badass attitude. Especially how despite the fact that she's after a certain goal it's still not boring because there are so many other side plots that link up😊

I love the scene between female kead and male lead it develop on their pace makung it enjoynable journey... I love the main character in the story😍😍.. the story development need to improve but overall i love the story.. 😍😍😍

Waaaaah ooh my oh my, can't wait. This story is really so engaging and I'm beginning to fall in love with each character. The writer is doing such a good job, I love you loads

This is an unpolished gem with intricate character and world design. Although some will find it hard to follow due to technical detail, I personally fell that the writer has put her love to it and strive for a better writing. Can’t wait for update please support this writing!

Amazing!!😍😘😘 Just can't wait for next update!! It is just amazing and fantastic story line with lots drama and emotions flowing in it.. it just makes one so mesmerized with the story that it makes you feel as u are the protagonist and the story revolves around u.. I request the writer to have mass release for next few updates. Just loved it 😘😘😘

The story is very good. it's interesting and thrilling with each part ahead.. I strongly support and suggest the writer to continue writing and know that you have ur supporter's backing u and encouraging u ahead..

I love the story all chapters are very interesting.I.am.so engrossed and looking forward for new updates..I cant wait for the next chapter sad it ended...I wanted to know.more about LYY and HBW journey..

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