Wrath Of Nature (Naruto X Percy Jackson)

Great book, long chapters and good grammar but sadly not my cup of teaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

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writing quality-4 stars there's some grammatical mistakes but other then that it's gucci story development-3 stars there were a couple times where the plot was extremely forced and didn't flow right and the whole premise of the story in of itself doesn't make much sense character design-3 star other then the girls he kinda made every guy a duche and a half and didn't quite nail naruto's personality or in built plot armor updating stability-5 stars this storys finished and that's a rare thing for webnovel world background-3 star it's not the best narutoxpersy crossovers ive read but it has some good points and some bad so a happy medium overall 3.6 stars I enjoyed the read but couldn't shake the feeling that this coulda been done better I figured out what is was that was bugging me, kurama was basically missing 90 percent of this story and naruto without kurama is just not the same in my opinion, expecially in a dark af world like percy jackson I feel like I would have enjoyed much more if he had kurama with him as I missed his snide tsundere personality throughout the story

This is story about Naruto after the Sasuke battle where he ends up getting messed by Zeus and saved by Gaia. He returns to the root and looks at the world properly to come to his new conclusions. Small amount of romance and harem. Naruto gets powerful as the story progresses and arrives at a state by the end which paves his path to immortality and power beyond his Canon counterpart.

It's bad alright , I've persisted through the initial few chapters hoping it won't continue being this way...it remained the same.

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