Invincible System start from One Piece
Author: adamsmith99
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The mc got choosen by the 'Crossing God' to cross to many worlds along with the 'Invincible System'.
Current world, One Piece.
Disclaimer.
*Writing this just for my own fun, and spend my boring time.
*English is not my mother language. I apologized for my bad grammar and bad english.
* I do not own One Piece, other Animation, Movies, Novels. Beside this :D
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Well i gave it a go and its exactly like I figured. Pointless fantsy self insert, stupid unbalanced system that completely upsets and power balance in the world in a few chapters. Generic 'harem' setting that has little to no actually development of a relationship and is just 'he's so strong, rich, cool etc... lets just fall for him instantly'. No character depth, no character development. The grammar is horrible, there is so many mistakes everywhere I had to reread entire sentences multiple times because they barely make sense. Oh and its one of those multiple worlds type ones so don't expect any good story, meaningful side characters etc... because the MC will just go into another world to destroy that eventually. There has never been a multiple world hopper fanfic that is any good. Ever. So yeah if you're one of the few rare readers who hope to find a nice quality fanfic here and do actually enjoy anime/ manga adaptions if they're done well. This isn't for you. Low quality. Of couse this won't stop the huge amount of fake reviews, the idiots who get excited over harem etc... In fact I wonder if the author will delete this review out of spite, they usually do. Someone copy and paste and save it.
45 chapters in the first day. I've got nothing but praise for the author 🙌🙏 The story is good as well! MC is OP from early but I still like him. I'll give this story straight 5 stars. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
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Wow dude first update with 45chapters within the first day of your stories release gonna start reading now🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟
Wow.. so many brain dead reader that give this s.hitty cliche wish fullfilment novel a 5 stars. I really want to know how their brain works. Maybe y'all just a nerd and weeb that just want a horny virgin ***** and OP retarded MC that goes around and f.uck everything up. Also. STOP WITH 'HAHAHAHAHAHAHAH' IN EVERY SINGLE CONVERSATION YOU JACK ASS
It was a very good story.... till MC became Nami's b*tch qqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqqq
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Mx is nami *****. Fucking pussy Mc just like the fucking author. Fuck this ****. You don’t even deserve 1 star. How the **** is Mc becoming nami Bitcoin is supposed to be other way around.
45 chaps first hour and good op harem **** ...................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
I love it. There is nothing to complain. Grammar is good, spelling is good, sentence structure is good, storyline is great. A perfect story. Keep up the good work.
here 5 stars..20 chps in one go..damn bro here..good show.. will read...now suggestion: OP MC...one man army style..no retarded perverted MC...no angsty tragic ****..some fluff and romance [why not?] if harem keep it small...eh...i guess I'll read now
The story was good until he become nami slave she take all his Mony, order him aroud, +He suposed to be smart in his past life now become retard, his personality unbalanced, the mc don't any pride not some a strong pride but a man pride. (-_-)
Pussy slave and beta male MC!!! [140 caracteres][140 caracteres][140 caracteres][140 caracteres][140 caracteres][140 caracteres][140 caracteres][140 caracteres][140 caracteres]
Don't like it at all. Mc is just a slave to women. He has no backbone at all. A disgusting personality I have to say. Beware mc is very submissive towards his women . He can't even argue with them. He just listen everything they say. And I don't this personality that's why I give it such a low rating.
The writing is okay but I have read a lot of one piece fanfic and this is just frustrating normally for me one piece gives me the feeling of excited for the next chapter but this book just means I'm fucking frustrated for the next chap and hope that doesn't happen but it does I love harem but at some point you get the idea that nami is the mc and pls don't say can't a bf listen to his gf cuz not how it works heck I even feel that nami owns the harem and he just a guy with dick meant to satisfy her aka boytoy even with her massocist tendencies just give nami a dick and I can bet you his harem can survive without him, it okay to give his women some screentime but your mistake was putting the mc as a side character the plot itself is one piece so its okay but this is trash among trash that's the fanfic its deserves