It's got potential but the only problem I got is the grammar and how hard is too know who's talking.
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4 years ago
4
Jasonenrick
Update, it is honestly annoying how weak he is ....I feel like he is one of those ' big words but are afraid to bite'.
Years of killing and Training and he isn't even Worth mentining in the eyes of the World strongest people....what am I talking about he isn't even medicore!
3 wishes and still not able to do anything or live as a free Person.
he is always someone's else subordinate and has do to what the Person says less he wants to die or get tortured.
What comes next are my personal Feeling so.....yeah
Akame as a lover, not gonna lie but I don't see her being a lover of anybody.
There are a Ton of interessting Females in the Story, my Favourite one Esdeath.
But there are also a lot of weak females that have interessting personalities and are beautiful but I don't see Akame as one of those.
All in all, it was Worth reading in the beginning but it got worse with time, except the grammar, the grammar got better.
also, I don't understand why he wants to reincarnate at Akame's Elite Seven enlisting Programm because let's be honest ...he didn't get anything out of it except Akame being his lover ...but that's it , for Real.
he got a good Taigu that can get him to he top of the World and has wished for good killing Talent or smth similar( I am not 100% Sure what he wished for exactly)
That means that he won't really learn anything in the group because he can learn it himself with ease .
The group is only holding him Back and he is only showing the Empire his Abilities and skills , which is Stupid.
Well, to finish it off because I got a lot of other things to do.....we have a weak Mc that in my opinion is a bit Stupid and didn't think while stating his wishes.
he doesn't try his all to get stronger and that's the reason he always gets played by a lot of people .....because he is weak.
I am nearing the 2000 Mark so let's end it here, I hope you(author) got what I wanted to say, If not, then well, can't changed that, aye ?
4 years ago
2
DragonSlayer11
plise just continu this plise plise!!!๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
I hope to see more Action ;)
Thanks for the Novel, only 3 Chapters so far, But I enjoy it a lot .
4 years ago
1
UnnamedKing
I liked it a lot after all it was the first fic I saw on WebNovel
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It's got potential but the only problem I got is the grammar and how hard is too know who's talking. exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp
Update, it is honestly annoying how weak he is ....I feel like he is one of those ' big words but are afraid to bite'. Years of killing and Training and he isn't even Worth mentining in the eyes of the World strongest people....what am I talking about he isn't even medicore! 3 wishes and still not able to do anything or live as a free Person. he is always someone's else subordinate and has do to what the Person says less he wants to die or get tortured. What comes next are my personal Feeling so.....yeah Akame as a lover, not gonna lie but I don't see her being a lover of anybody. There are a Ton of interessting Females in the Story, my Favourite one Esdeath. But there are also a lot of weak females that have interessting personalities and are beautiful but I don't see Akame as one of those. All in all, it was Worth reading in the beginning but it got worse with time, except the grammar, the grammar got better. also, I don't understand why he wants to reincarnate at Akame's Elite Seven enlisting Programm because let's be honest ...he didn't get anything out of it except Akame being his lover ...but that's it , for Real. he got a good Taigu that can get him to he top of the World and has wished for good killing Talent or smth similar( I am not 100% Sure what he wished for exactly) That means that he won't really learn anything in the group because he can learn it himself with ease . The group is only holding him Back and he is only showing the Empire his Abilities and skills , which is Stupid. Well, to finish it off because I got a lot of other things to do.....we have a weak Mc that in my opinion is a bit Stupid and didn't think while stating his wishes. he doesn't try his all to get stronger and that's the reason he always gets played by a lot of people .....because he is weak. I am nearing the 2000 Mark so let's end it here, I hope you(author) got what I wanted to say, If not, then well, can't changed that, aye ?
plise just continu this plise plise!!!๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
Excellent๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
I hope to see more Action ;) Thanks for the Novel, only 3 Chapters so far, But I enjoy it a lot .
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