MY PRECIOUS.

MY PRECIOUS.

Fantasy173 Chapters589.4K Views
Author: Darlene_Virginia
4.82
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Dina oblivious to the secrets behind her birth grew up to be a free-spirited, young aspiring alcoholic woman. She got a gift or maybe a curse from her mother who passed away after giving birth to her and her twin sister, Tina.



Adrian's girlfriend disappeared a few years ago. He goes in search of a person who he believes might know about his girlfriend's location. On the way there he meets drunken Dina and gets bitten by her.



A wandering white shadow plays an active role to make them spend the night together. The next day, Dina runs from there before Adrian wakes up.



After a month, Adrian meets Grace, mother of Tina, and fixes their marriage. But Tina disappears mysteriously and Dina was brought in to fill in her place.



Unaware of the knives they were holding against each other, Adrian and Dina get married. Their wild marriage life had just started when the shadow lurking around Adrian comes back to life with the help of Tina.



(The book cover does not belong to me. All the credits go to the artist.)

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BaeVida
BaeVida

Wow, it is a nice book. Narration and description are on point. It has its own sad fate that brings out the locked emotions in someone... Little errors but can be overlooked as we all are not perfect. It doesn't change the flow of the story and the pace... Author did a good job. Nice one

4 years ago
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Jo_J
Jo_J

Nice! Interesting story! I like the action, I like the drama. So many names at the beginning... but that's fine. Please just not use the word "CEO" in your novel. So many people already have "allergy" for that :))) Besides you are doing exellent job! Keep writing! Good luck with it!

4 years ago
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Butterscotch_07
Butterscotch_07

Intriguing plot. Two babies separated since birth, having different attitudes... Till what I've read, I found the story really interesting. There are a few grammar mistakes but I think you can work on those as they are not obvious while reading. Good luck [img=recommend]

4 years ago
3
Joanna_Kuteesa
Joanna_Kuteesa

I loved the book. There were some errors but you still brought of the story, I can't wait for the other parts [img=update][img=update][img=recommend]

4 years ago
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bibiyenini
bibiyenini

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4 years ago
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CtrlAltKnight
CtrlAltKnight

A solid and startling narration plus a great plot! New hidden gem get! Please keep it up, dear author. Hmnn. How can I help more... Oh, I suggest you make a better cover through Canva or any free app. I feel like your cover isn't doing your writing justice. Please keep up! May the author write more, edit more, enjoy more, and even earn more^^.

4 years ago
2
AxlesOfFate
AxlesOfFate

From what I read I was quite interested and quickly. The feeling of disappointment of the baby that survived and was not taken was heart-wrenching but set the mood for the entire story perfectly.

4 years ago
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Yard_Min
Yard_Min

The start is really promising and points to a great story every way, flow of thought is very good, several pages along the story the characters and story gain momentum, keeping that pace and story line is very difficult and you wouldn’t realize it unless you were to write a story. Waiting for the horror part now.

4 years ago
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Yard_Min
Yard_Min

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4 years ago
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rain_berry_
rain_berry_

Nice stuff.!! I love the way author takes the theme. apt title and i wanna appreciate writer's ability to Express and communicate the idea through written words.

4 years ago
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lucifer_123
lucifer_123

Oh!!!! What a book , i just can’t wait for the incoming chapters. It’s a interesting book with great plots and twists. It’s an excellent book, that’s worth for your time.

4 years ago
2
Shadow_Magus
Shadow_Magus

A well written story. Not too many grammatical errors and shows the plot and characters without too much or too little descriptive writing. Really good so far. Keep up the good work author!!!

4 years ago
2
TheElisse
TheElisse

First of all, you made me cry in the first chapter, so that means its a great book right from the beginning. I just love your writing style. I cant say much more because its only getting started but I like it a lot so far

4 years ago
2
xiaohai_23
xiaohai_23

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4 years ago
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lazylyn
lazylyn

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4 years ago
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