The Tale of the Strongest

Shameless review by me. This will be officially my second novel. You can message me in discord for some questions and recommendations in discord (MikruZero#2651)

Great work!! Is it in any participation of writing contest?? I think it has great potential to be exposed to wider audience! The structure of this work is impressive and background development is very mature!

Really strong beginning to this story. The protagonist is funny dude who the reader enjoys taking the adventure with. And his demon slave is also quite amusing. Love the banter between the two leads. Great sense of humor. There's also a real epic feel at play here with the warring demons and angels and earth's survival at stake. I look forward to seeing the protagonist and demon undertake their journey. I'm sure much hilarity will ensue. Writing style is clear, concise and easy to read. Strongly recommend giving this one a go!

Pulls all the right strings of thrill, so far, a well-constructed story, there's just 5 chapters so I'm only judging it based off of this, keep going! all the best POST MORE.

Wow, Literally wow. Man, you have really got a knack for writing. I really love the plot. The character background and fantasy mixture are too good, the only thing you need more is popcorn. Really a fantastic story. Keep updating the author . More power to you.

I like the story, there's some nice build up character. Good luck for you, and i hope there's more interesting part in the future. Can't wait to the next chapter :)

Hmm let's see I felt it connected mostly because I do like school settings. The synopsis was quite good describing not just one way to get a power, but many others that are almost the same which I feel more novels should reference to. The interaction between characters seemed natural and I liked the little reference to masculine and feminine article. I am quite a language geek and do love to see those little things. So far pretty good.

New book. Great start if i say so myself. But it needs more chapter to make it enjoyable. Storyline and the development of characters are good. Good luck to author for this book.

This story is lit! I gotta say I'm impressed! With talent and skills accompanied with hard work, this will fare well in the future! Kudos and Congrats! May your novel prosper in the future! from Review swap....

This story is definitely a great read and something refreshing for a while. I enjoy how witty the male lead is. And the narratives and conversations are all delivered well to the readers. World background is also well-written. Overall this story is engaging and fun. Greatly recommended and addition to my collections. Great work auhor! I look forward for more updates.

A good novel. It is a good read. Although there are some mistakes, you could easily ignore them and they won't affect your reading. It also has a fantasy feeling where you could imagine the general fantasy fiction's starts. Comedy and a lucky chance for the mc. You won't regret reading this. The mc also doesn't seem to be kind. It could be described as him being a carefree guy; an mc that many people like. Although there aren't many chapters, I could see the potential.

I really enjoyed this book. The way the characters of the story go together. It's a different way looking at the story. I was able to see a new perspective from how the Author would be apart of the story. It is very exciting to see how the Butterfly Effect takes place. Especially when it is the author changing the very nature of a story he himself wrote. I hope to be able to read and experience more from this series.

Great work! Awesome premise. The narration is good. There are some minor typos here and there but nothing that cannot be addressed by editting. Keep up the good work. The story is interesting. 👍

This is a fun story that needs some work in the writing department. Once the author has a better handle on his or her writing, the story will begin to shine.