When The Sun Falls

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Author: lol_shoe
4.99
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Meet Rain, a sweet, caring, young average adult with some not-so-average friends. She spends her time worrying about school and helping Momma around the house. But when a new transfer student suddenly arrives and catches her attention things begin to get interesting. Dealing with jealous best friends, crazy mood swings, and a dangerously toxic relationship, it seems Rain will never get a break. But just how far will she go before her world completely crumbles...

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Myguy_4006
Myguy_4006

so I'm patiently waiting on the next update but chapter 3 has some a nice little poem in it and 😤 i need to know what going to happen next. The story is pretty good and I love the characters so much. Rain is a little all over the place and its kind of hilarious.😝😝😝

3 years ago
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DaoisttIszLX
DaoisttIszLX

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3 years ago
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King_Lj
King_Lj

i really like the fact that this book has a southern vibe. you can really tell from the beginning and the characters all have a slight sense of humor that keeps you engaged

3 years ago
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Mel_Aniv
Mel_Aniv

Nice start! Grammar and punctuations are on point. The plot was steadily moving and then the characters are interacting in a life-like manner. The narration was decent and I like it ❤️ Readers, do check this novel out. [img=recommend]

3 years ago
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CultMaster
CultMaster

If you like a story wIth great written characters thIs is it their characters are so funny and with great written personalities . This story is about to have you dieing laughing whoever made this sarcasm game is on point

3 years ago
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marshin
marshin

I wish I knew exactly what kind if relationship the female lead had with her male best friend. thats not how friends act towards each other 😗 but idk

3 years ago
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Shadow_eater13
Shadow_eater13

I just want to know if Rain and Darnell LIKEEEEE each other because, why the f**k are they so close and this book has some crazy poetry like what😍

3 years ago
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match_maker
match_maker

okay so I'm like three chapters in tbh but so far I'm invested because the vibes are so unique. This sounds like a teenage struggle that I can kind of relate too. I really love Mr. Perry so much 😂

3 years ago
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Sly_Life
Sly_Life

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3 years ago
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1k_xSGxCF
1k_xSGxCF

I love this book! It has so much drama, romance Im in love with the friendship. Awesome sauce!! If you read this book you will fall in love with in.

3 years ago
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Mask01
Mask01

3 years ago
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1k_xSGxCF
1k_xSGxCF

Awesome and professional reading. Couldnt stop reading this book very engaging. I love the Darrel and Rain's relationship. This is an awesome love book.

3 years ago
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1k_xSGxCF
1k_xSGxCF

Awesome sauce! This nivel is engaging and written professionally. I feel like im in a movie. Great content i like both Tye and Darnell. Especially Darnell his character is so boy next door.

3 years ago
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Destany_Coleman
Destany_Coleman

Mr. Perry is that one mean teacher in school :( I feel like Rain has a crush on Darnell because it comes off as flirting everytine they ars around each other. But yeahh when's the next update???

3 years ago
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calfikydra
calfikydra

First of all - the attitude ''Momma'' has, is amazing and so fierce, i love her! Second, the way the author build the characters, are so well fitted for a **** novel. The way it's written, makes it so easy to imagine what is going on, as you read it. There is also a very impressive poem included, in the third chapter, that i really enjoyed. I'm still not sure where the story is headed, but i'll definetely keep on reading, so i can find out. You got yourself a new fan <3

3 years ago
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