Becoming a Demon to Defy God
Tormented in his life, Lixue, the man abandoned by the gods, embrace the devil's clutches, and reborn into a demon. He swore by his name that he will pay back the torment he received 100 times, 10,000 times worst.
All he seeks is destruction, chaos, and despair.
"Just so you know, I'm not the type of villain that likes to monologue before taking action."
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Author's note*: From the tag choices, there is no BL tag, so I put a yaoi tag, though it won't be as intense as yaoi...
Author's note**: This story has been dropped by the author. For those who wanted to read it, please do so if you are okay with it. I have put a spoiler of the ending in the comment section in my final announcement. Thank you very much.
*Cover is not mine (found it on Pinterest) and credit to @LordValmar for the edit
Torture fantasy novel in a sci-fi setting. If that is what you're looking for then this novel does it well. If that's not something you're into then steer clear.
Rating it 5/5. Review after CH 7. Some notable things: Writing quality. The author has a good knack with the language used (english) and it is very easy to read and understand. While it doesn't affect the readability, there were times that paragraphs were continuously started with "he" or "the", and could make it repetitive. I would recommend for the author to employ "dangling modifiers" to his writing, and maybe alternate with active and passive voice. It adds more color to the message. Story itself has a straightforward plot of revenge. It is interesting as the subject of revenge is god himself. I want to see how it progresses, whether his rage would deteriorate, or even more aggravated. Character design, so far the MC sticks to his personality. Vengeance driven madness. I particularly liked how the devil was introduced, which maybe mirrored to some literature, but has a unique personality. The power given to MC is also creative as it's more about intelligence and influence, not the brutal type. Overall, this does deserve a 5. Good work!
The very first chapter tells how the story is going to be. . . readers will get the idea if the story is for them or not. The author portrayed cruelty, evil pretty well. The writings are with a decent description (tone the first few chapters a bit more as the reader will judge from there). And write fast and update fast it's the only way to go, though it's hard for some like me who's a slow writer. well, at last, I can say good luck with your journey.
I love the theme and the protagonist. Beautiful, evil, and confident.. well I like that about him. I also hope I can knew more about thirteen's back story in later chapters. I also think I can see other demons than MC in later chapters. Anyway, it is a good novel that keep me waiting for new chapters everydays.
Im a friend of the author and I honestly just made this account a few days ago just to read her story. I didnt even bother to change my username (But I just did because it's embarrasing lol). She asked me to review this so here I am. But Im gonna review this honestly and really you wont be dissapointed. Though there are still some flaws in the story and maybe some plot holes, it was still enjoyable because the language the author use light and easy to read (especially for me because my english is not that good). Im also veerryy curious who the seme is because I cant imagine Lixue falling in love with another person. Well, continue doing your best. Imma support you all the way.
There are various elements involved in the novel. The ML's emotions in each of the situation is well portrayed. The language was simple and understandable with almost no grammatical mistakes. The story is written in such a way that it keeps the readers on hook. Well Written!! Keep Going!!
I love how you portray your character into a twisted one and it's not the usual dense or dumb male MC. This one is cunning and manipulative, in my opinion. I don't have any opinions on grammar and stuff. Keep up the work, author! ^_^ P.S. I'll be putting this on my lib to read it further and wait for more updates! ^_^
the story is very good, the plot is very interesting, I'm very bored with the story of the weak and kind MC shou, this story gives a new unique MC, the MC is strong and independent, smart and mischievous and also very interesting.
....................... I don't have anything to say but this book is glorious. ....................................................................................................................................
I really enjoyed the novel. There are some mistakes in grammar and writing here and there but nevertheless, the story and characters are interesting. Hope more chapters come out soon.
I like the persona of the main character. It has a good plot and untypical scenarios unfolding. Some parts of the story were just a bit confusing but it was still good.
I'm quite intrigued by the story . It doesn't have typical story of main lead taking revenge but it's about a villain who'll tak revenge by taking thousands of life .
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Bon roman, l'histoire est sympa, les personnage sont bien décrit, il manque un peu de construction du monde. Mais dans l'ensemble bon roman.