Alexander Benjamin Tennyson (Ben 10 Fanfic)

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the author doesn't have common sense, in the second chapter the MC was fawning about how he doesn't have any hair on his body except his head which is obvious because he has not gone through puberty. the authors English is also terrible

Characters are dull and have no depth, this guy has thick plot armor whenever he has to talk to someone, they always believe him, do what he says, they always say how he's perfect and chooses the best method super duper quick. Gwen and Grandpa Max are soooo robotic in this story. Grammar is a low priority for this author considering that words are missing sometimes and they spoken English is very basic at best.

After reading the description I'm very hyped to read it and I hope it won't get dropped untill chapter 300+ .

Gwen is less inteligent than the original and grandpa Max is also lot more less vigilance than the original.ashley's character is not interesting

Idea behind this story is good but in my humble and personal opinion it's gone the wrong way starting from the chap 2 and it became something ı can't read (it's my opinion of course there will be people that like this book but it's not my cup of tea)

great story don't drop it please 🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺

Good story development so far but I think a little more character interaction is needed. Otherwise it's going brilliantly. 😁😁😁😁😁👍👍👍 [img=recommend]

Idk man just so many grammar errors and inconsistencies. I really can't stand this novel but I'm glad you're happy to write it as I'm an old Ben 10 fan. Maybe just re-read it and fix the spelling and grammar mistakes.

A frankly boRing story with some of the worst grammar i have ever seen. Just putting the raws or whatever in google translate would probably be better and if this is not A translation ooof because The graMmar and structuring is appaling

it's just plain it is like you are writing an essay on some topic or writing an exam 😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑

Well instead of Ben 10....it should be something like me and my perfect life after Omnitrix... everything was just too good...no hardships...no challenge....in the end i know mc will save the day....he got girls and magic....it's just too good to be story....

Really good ben 10 fic, i have seen a lot of ben 10 fics and none of them is this good and interesting Really looking forward to see how it goes

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